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Awesome story extremely enthralling.

Even though I understand why I still hate that Brandon just plays with Tim. Tim just loves him so much. Gods. Tim is cuddly.

~Canis

When Brandon asked Timmy to stop following him, he really asked for a lot. And Tim didn't even get a chance to tell him what was really in his heart. There was no actual communication between them. There never is, between mortals and gods... And no matter how generous Brandon had been, Tim still didn't get what he wanted. Funny, after waiting for so long for something real to happen between the characters, now this chapter made me sad. Maybe it's easier to adore a god from a distance. From close-up, the gods prove to be terribly insubstantial. I am very curious what will Tim think once the high of the great sex dissipates.

(and sorry I wrote 'Till' in my previous review. just reflex. I'm a die-hard Rammstein fan and the name types itself).

i just saw this in Slash and thought i'll give it a read. Now i can't wait for the next chapter so i'll be right here waiting! :3

where to begin...The first half of the ch had me bitting my pillow moaning "oh no!" It was not in the least orgasmic. Then when he had Timmy on the couh withthe wind blowing where the sun don't shine, I had to stop reading to hyperventilate "Noooooo!" I kept thinging he's going to do something really bad to embarass Timmy and when the cam came out I was sure. Then you had to go and make it allbe a joke after sending my blood pressure through the roof. By the time they got it on, I was such a nervous reck waiting for the other shoe to drop that I couldn't even enjoy it! Not Fair!!! The suprise request for the digits at the end there gave me some hope for Timmy. Maybe if he becomes a regular booty call, he'll have a chance with Brandon after all what is a boyfriend if not a booty call with exclusive rights? :) More Timmy please?!

Great chapter! Brandon seems to have his own insecurities-him refusing to believe Tim really has feelings for him. Of course, Michael and his lifestyle would do that to a person! Yay! I was right about that guy being another victim of Michael's! I'm really interested in seeing what happens now that Michael's out of prison. I'm assuming we'll be meeting him as well? I can't wait!

oh yes! finally! I'm surprise Tim still awake afterward, this sex scene is just so hot, he he he.

sad though Brandon want nothing more than that, whatever the problem with this Michael is must be solved, does Brandon love him?

anyway, great chapter! can't wait for more!

Hm, yes that was hot, worth waiting the chapter ^_^ I read it last night, but decided to wait before leaving you a review since my thoughts didn't run quite so smoothly right then.

I wonder about Brandon, yes he acts like a bastard and yet now he showed another side, or a climbs of it anyway. It seems to me that under that cold mask is someone who’s vulnerable and lonely. Maybe his past with Michael has made him this way?

And Tim, heh, well he had his first time and glad to see that he enjoyed, though it didn't seem like an ideal first time from an outsiders point of view, thinking that it was with a person so indifferent with emotions, but as long as Tim had his god, he doesn't mind at least for now, but what about later? Next morning? I doubt he'd grow to regret it; he's placed Brandon such a high pedestal after all.

And on the other hand, maybe this stalking is something that Brandon needs? I mean no one he's been with would maybe dare to lurk their way into his life and thus under that wall of his, but could Tim do that?

Though I can't see this relationship working either, if they'd ever enter in a normal relationship that is... I mean, like I said, Tim has placed Brandon on that high pedestal, that; first he'd always feel lesser than Brandon and second he'd be shocked to see that Brandon really is just a normal person with his own annoying habits and such and third I think Brandon would need someone stronger than Tim, mentally etc.

And then there's Ryan. I don't know what you've planned. It seems that Tim did have an attraction to him, but only tried to deny it, but maybe if Ryan would be patient and if Tim would see more clearly...hm... it could work... Hehe, I dunno, I think it takes something big to make Tim see the reality though =/

Okay, I think I've rambled enough and if I keep going, I'll keep running in circles ^.^ I can't wait for the next part!

-C-

I love you, you beautiful wonderful author you!!! XD I nearly wanted to hang Brandon's dick from the highest tree when he tried to pull that little prank. But I almost screamed like a little fan girl when Timmy got to be seme. Freakin' HAWT!!! Well, thank you sooo much for that wonderful update. Hope you can quench my thirst for more soon. But (for once) I'll be satisified. If only for a little while ~___^

Hot damn.