rate_review Reviews

I'm so happy to see an update! This is one of my favorite stories on here if not the favorite.
It's hard to find good slash stories these days. You're very refreshing from the anime/yaoi-inspired 13 year olds who write here, it's nice.

Chapter 17

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for returning!!!! Hope you hit a nice smooth area
of life to enjoy for yourself for awhile!!!!!!!!

Love, love, love his reaction to his mom's inquiries!!
Love, love, love his new wardrobe choices!!
Love, love, love his new found courage to speak to his bird friend!!

Don't worry 'cause I'll always check like the lurky I am for any updates!!!

Thanks,
R

hell yeah, it's mission accomplished! can't wait for more!!!

Im so happy you updated!! *squels* Thank you! That chapter was cute, Im glad he's getting a new look. Kinda sad he's leaving the ways of a stalker...lol. I hope Brandon calls him, for more than just a booty call, though Im sure that'd make Tim (and me) happy lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

i can't believe tim is changing so much for brandon. maybe tim can leave behind his stalkerish ways and find someone who loves/obsesses over him back... or maybe he can get brandon to like him... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! and i wonder if his stutter will ever go away...
ASOTA

This was one of my favorite chapters, just so funny! I laughed so hard when Tim told Kiran (god i can't spell his name lol) that he was gay. XDD Also when Tim was shopping for clothes XD

Will you be continuing this awesome story?

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Lol, damn, but after those two chapters (I forgot to review the other one! punish me!) all I want to do is scream. Timmy, you dog, so you`re the 'shy, invisible one' huh? And WHO screwed two times in one night, HUH? After chapter no 15 I thought that Timmy starts to waver, you know, he suspiciusly repeated that he loves Brandon, like he wanted to convince himself. But the next chappie left me, um, speachless. Now I don`t know what to think, here I had this little nice theory about Timmy and you just came with update and I`m confused again. You`re messing with me (which means you`re a very good writer, if you could reduce me to screaming in frustration *laughs*)
Wow, this review is super chaotic and *reads it again* yes, stupid *beams* Hope you understand just a little (at least that those chapters were totaly awesome!)
Aaaaand, hahahahahaha, I KNEW that Timmy "I-So-Look-Like-A-Submissive-Littel-Uke" will show his dominant tendencies (or domineering, damn, my English is so bad >.<).
It was so sweet, when Brandon called him 'cute' *melts* Maybe you could find some pic of a guy who resembles Tim, so we could drool over him? *bribes you with chocolate cheesecake*
I think I love Ryan a little bit more =''=
End of this (winning awards!) pathetic review. Kisses XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Wtf? My review was cut in half! O.o

Wow. That was really sexy. Things are really getting interesting. I like the idea of Tim being torn between Ryan and Brandon. I like Ryan, because he's sweet and it seems like him and Tim together would be really cute. But I can't help but pull for Tim and Brandon just because the relationship between the two of them is one of my most fascinating, fucked up things I have ever read. Brandon is Tim's God, so each time they see each other and more recently, have a sexual encounter, it's like a religious experience for him. And that's just really hot and sexy.

I'm also curious about Michael and Bailey and all these other peripheral characters. Keep it up!