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I'm so happy you updated ^_^

I loved the talk between Ryan and Tim, actually kinda fun that Ryan didn't really have a crush on Tim but used him, like well, Tim kinda used him. BUUUT do I sense some chance here? *snickers* Both have these idols who will never be with them for real (right?) so they end up spending time together and yay! Suddenly they kiss and go at it like rabits?? *innicent smile* Hih, it is as interesting image and it would be cute... there is that attraction at least... so hm.... ok, ok, I just wait, read and find out :)

-kolgrim-

TIMMY!!!!(Squeal!) I don't know how I missed a ch but I think after reading this one I must have missed something because I don't remember reading about a party. SO this is going to be short and sweet so I can go back and read what I missed. Ryan is sounding like an ass now. However the thing with Fabe does sound pretty interesting; would love to see how that ends and if there are any surprises at the bowling alley.

Oh my. . . I like this story. I can totally relate to Timmy (minus the whole stalker thing). And Brandon is a bit of a jerk. . . but an emotionally scarred jerk. And I have to root for Ryan, he's so much nicer than Brandon. Well. . . keep up the good work.

Awesome...i just.... I love you.

OMG!! please MORE!!
I dunno if i like Brandon, and i feel horrible for Ryan!
Tim is freaky, and his thoughts seriously made me crack up!
this is a very sexy story, an i read it all in one sitting!
I wanna know about Michael, Bailey and Matt!!
^_^

Goood! An update! :D I've been following this story almost from the beginning and I had started to think it was dead. I'm glad to know it isn't. :D Thanks a lot for the good story! I really enjoy the little creep even if he does kinda creeps me a bit. XDDD He's so strange! Though, that IS good. Very good. It's refreshing to have a story where the main character is so uncommon. And it really makes you wonder how he's going to evolve, if he'll kill the evil bad monster Michael and win the heart of the princess... errr... Brandon. God, did I just turn Michael into a dragon and... O_o Brandon into a princess? ... Please forget I ever said that... *shivers at the idea of Brandon in a Disney Princess dress* O_Ou Sorry Brandon!

I'm so glad you fially updated, I kept thinking of this story and checked any possible updates from time to time :) Hopefully your muse is back now and we get another chapter soon :P Though, even if not, I wait patiently for it.

So Tim is really changing, new clothes and asking personal questions XD I liked Kierans reaction to Tim telling him that he was gay, I found it amusing somehow.

And this Simon, I wonder if we see him again?

And and will Brandon call Tim eventually? hm...

Oh and Ryan (hopefully I remember his name right) anyway I kinda miss him too.

Thank you again for this chapter! I enjoyed it greatly. n_n

all I have to say is...UPDATE!!!! timmy's so cute who will he end up with you should make another char guy who like him that
Brandon knows! duh duh duhhhhhh don't listen to me im a dummy =P

oh dear god, I just feel like hugging Tim (virtually ofcourse). But the moment where he actually follows brandons wink to get a second wink.. awwwww!
I think that the character of Kieran, that rugged natury feel, is very well done even though he doesn't have a great place.
Hmm... I am also left wondering how the sweet,cheated lover of a store clerk can be made happy too. Hell everyone one else seems on cloud nine!
I am so glad you are back!

oh timmy. poor timmy. <3 timmy!!!

he and brandon should hook up- wait- they already did! woo!!! i wonder how timmy will change within the next chapters. i can't wait to see what you do with them all! great work!!