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Tim sounds like he has aspbergers. They usually have trouble catching social cues but can learn if someone works with them. Not being able socialize like everyone else can make some depressed, withdrawn, distrustful.

It's a little painful for me to read this story. It hits a little too close to home.

This is getting kind of weird, to tell the truth. Tim acts just like my cousin, Timothy. Odd. What are the chances you'd come up with a character that acts just like my cousin, and has the same name? Not to mention my name is Ryan. . . so many coincidences.

Anyway. I really enjoyed this chapter, though maybe less so than previous ones. But it was still good. Can't wait for more.

While I cannot agree with many issues and subjects, I like your voice and sympathize with Tim. This is a controversial and powerful bit of fiction.

Best.

Sincere regards,
Kristina Dalton
Submissions Editor
Stonehedge Publishing

*squeel* Ryan is too adorable! Even though he did technically use Tim, I think he likes him. I dunno, but Fadian may just regret losing him. Great chspter, update soon please!!!

Chapter 18

Wow!! Our little Timmy is growing up!

He has come such along way from the days he was trapped in his head!!!!
He sounds suspiciously like a normal person now!! HA!

Ryan is adorable!! That's all I'll say on the matter!
Really fine conversation between the two of them. Very revealing!!

Thanks,
R

I'm so glad you updated! I kept hoping you would! I just love Tim! I'm pretty sure i've mentioned how I've grown attached to him as a character before. I'm pretty sure he's making Ryan out to be way more sneaky than he really is. I'm still positive Ryan has growing feelings for and I still like him. I have to say, I was surprised at Kieran's reaction at Tim's offer. Guess he didn't want to look too excited huh? either that or he just likes being left alone with his birds...

It's really interesting to see Tim have feelings he never had before since he's never interacted socially until now. maybe in the future he'll be able to recognize them for what they are (and that it's not all about Brandon).

Really looking forward to more!

Great another update!
Im sort of wondering if Tim is making a mistake about Ryan's intentions
your characters make my heart hurt, lol, thats a weird way of phrasing it.
ryan wants Fabe, but is seemingly willing to settle for Tim
then Tm wants Brandon and is sort of feeling things for Ryan but doesn't want to acknowledge his feelings!
ARGH!!!
More please! ^_^

Hahaha XDDD I won't get anywhere near Brandon wardrobe with a pink frilly dress. I promise XD But if I get stuck with a Disney princess dress... Maybe we can throw it on Michael? He seems like someone we wouldn't feel bad crossdressing and dropping at... I don't know... a full Mall on Saturday? :D

God Tim's mind is warped... Using Ryan to get near Brandon? I guess it is possible, somehow. But god... I would have never thought of that! Anyway I think he's in for a few surprises with Ryan, He's probably going to end with a friend without even realizing it. Looking forward the next chapter! Thanks for the good work!

maybe brandon will show up when tim goes bowling... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA

*~oo, i love this story, everything about it is so realistic and perceptible (is that a real word?)~*
*~nah, it seems like tim's last thought in ch 18 will be a set up for disaster~*
*~can't wait for the next chapter~!~*