rate_review Reviews

Hello! I just read the story and i liked it very much! and i have a question, i don't know if there was an answer in writer's note I just didn't read it. So here comes the q: Am i wrong but it seems that at the start of their babysitter-child relationship Brandon and Tim were friends but then suddenly Brandon put a mental wall between them? And if they were fiends will we find out why Brandon changed his attitude towards Tim? And maybe it may sounds a little bit mean but I think (wish) it'd cool if somehow Brandon will understand what Tim feels. And I think I won't believe if Tim gives up on Brandon I wish They'd be together! I can't wait for a new chapter!!!

and in addition to my previous note I want to say I actually understand Brandon's present behavior well enough. I just can't stop sympathize with Tim because the story tell from his pov. Yeah And i don't know what caught my attantion in the story's description but I break my rule not to read unfinished stories& Now I'm suffering and dying to know what will be next!

Phew, that was hot. Brandon's just so mean to poor Tim, even though he does need to get a life. Hopefully he will, and with a uy who appreciates him. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

Dude, i'll be so happy when he gets a life, then maybe he can become someone Brandon lusts for, only the next time he might not want him back. I'm glad he'll finally grow out of his shell a little bit

wow, I loved this chapter! It was so intense and it actually got my heart racing. I mean well, especially the end it was somehow so disturbing and hot, I was scared for Timmy my mind going; noooo you crazy boy you'll get caught! I was so sure he would! By Brandon or some random people ,or the guards of the mall.

This stalking of his really is creepy.

Brandon is so emotionally cold, I feel sorry for him, but I'm glad he told Timmy to get a life and not kill himself and I hope Tim listens.

So next chapter is bowling? I can't wait to read more! I adore your writing :)

You know... I think Brandon actually did him a favor! I kinda dislike Brandon actually. I'm sympathetic, because he seems to be pretty messed up in his own right and he doesn't deserve to have some creepy kid stalking him, but at the same time, he's kind of a jerk. I'm happy that Tim is dressing himself better and being more social even if he is doing it for a completely unhealthy reason.

Hello, usually I don't make the effort to review a story but this one has touched me so much(and because you write responses). This may sound surprising but I feel like I can relate to a lot of what Tim is going through. I have social problems too, and I recite over in my head what I'm going to say when I order food, lol. I'm not near to the extreme he is, but I too have liked a guy so much it was pretty much obsession (I still do but he's currently 20 hours away). I didn't change myself or anything but I changed where I hung out just to catch a glimpse of him. It makes me happy to read someone who is going through such problems even if it is a made up character. And I have to say I hope he turns into some gorgeous stud and Brandon regrets not keeping him as a close acquaintance (he seems shallow enough to).

Oh Timmy, don't get a life.
That would be too boring to read.

This is the most awesome story ever I still him to hook up with brad. even after the "get a life" part update soon please =D

to tell you the truth i rarely stay up late to read a story that is not hp. the thing is that i really like the story and the characters, mostly Brandon. Tim is weird but i understand him in away that makes me pause and think of others. it just makes me wonder how everything will continue though out the story and how it will end. this is on story i will have to keep track of. i have the url saved to my phone (how silly of me.)any who good job and i hope you continue to write and have fun with it. 5 Kudos to you.
~Katie