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Finally I got around reading your update and I loved it! I felt little sad that Tim and Ryan's thing won't work after all, I confess I had my hopes up for them. I think they would make a cute couple.

And the ending wow, it excites me as much as it worries me, I wonder if Tim trully realises what he's getting himself into? I hope we get to read more soon :)

OMG....wtfXD
I love this fic whahahahahXD
It is so embarrasing to read and..>_< omgXD at some parts I was like 'omg run run run!!!!' and I actually took a pause because I thought it was very humiliating...(the scene I mean)
Wow..I love this fic..
It is funny, hot, embarassing,and god...the angst!

I love it! I love TIm....he is soo .....I don't know....I find him quite daring...
I'm kind of a stalker too..XD hihi, But I'm not going as far as to stalk him towards his own houseXD omg I wouldn't dare..XD
Hmmm....Brandon...I kinda love him....but what did happen to him?
He had a hard past I think O_O he doesn't trust anyone or so?XD
I don't know.....

Anyways Fabe does he like Tim? I mean patting his shoulder the whole time...HELOOOOW *waves* ..xD
maybe he is secretly gay??XD go away ellie shoo!
omg, that last scene! fck man>_< that was really mean to stop right there..!!!!
The guy....the mystery guy ... I love himXDXDXD omg....the last scene was fcking hot!
and you HAD to stop right THERE! whyyyT_T

Anyways ..thank you I love this story..! it has the whole package in it!
I love it thank you for posting your story..
and can you please update soon?!?!?!? god I love this XD

oh my god this story is so fantastic! You rock girl. Please update soon!

Goed, ik ga voor neurochirurg leren. Dan snij ik de Brandon-obsessieve hersenkwab eruit.
Ik wil meer Ryan! <3
Kan Tim geen hersenschudding krijgen ofzo? En helemaal into Ryan gaan?

Verder ben ik ook best benieuwd wat er van de date van Kieran en Laura geworden is. :D

Ben ik nu flink geweest?

*haalt nog even een bord boven* Ryan!, Ryan!

Sorry, ik hou nu eenmaal van schattige lieve jongens wiens onschuldige zieltje nog niet verpest en sicko is.
Als je een beetje opschiet met Cadans, zul je wel merken: ik hou ook van Sieger. ;)

Hope he gets together with Ryan!

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Yeah glad to see Timmy back! I loved the bowling alley confusion. It was so outside his social skills it was funny as heck. Any teen worth their salt would recognize a reverse psyche plot to lure him. The ending wasn't much of a cliffie for me so I'm happy.

Chapter 20

Girl!!! Where you been?!!!! HA!! Thanks for making it back!!!!

Little Timmy is such an idiot!!!! I LOVE HIM!!!! (I relate!)

While Ryan maybe too mature and "good" for Timmy, I'm not sure meeting
strangers out in back ally's of clubs can ever be a great idea!!!

Geez!!!
What happens if the guy really likes little boys like Timmy and sexes him up?!
What if the guy just uses him and takes all his money?!! Leaving him with a STD!!!
What if the guy drugs him with the promise of mind numbing sex and kidnaps him?!!!
What if Branden joins in and Timmy learns to hang out outside of clubs like a little rat-pervert?!!! What if the guy dresses him up like a girl and makes him call him daddy?!!!
What if... Okay I'll stop. (There's a reason I'm not a writer.)

So, I haven't been bowling in like...forever, so thanks for the trip down memory lane and I see now that the scoring is electronic, no more paper and pencil projected up on the wall, but everything else sounds the same!!!

Is Fabe into Timmy?
There seem to be touching going on. And maybe some lingering eye contact.
Maybe I'm reading too much into it. But it would be interesting!!!!!

Thanks for the long chapter!!!!
R

This is so fucking hot...

Oh, yes. Yes, it is.

Thank you for update!!! I Like it!

Ohmygod! Eeek! I can't even begin to say how much I LOVE this fic. Totally amazing. I love the storyline; I've never read any fics with stalkers in them xD Brandon is an asshole, and Timmy is dorky but cute. I like Ryan, it would be cute it they got together, but if Timmy really couldn't like him like that, then I'm glad he was honest and didn't. Ohhh the guy in the alley sounds pretty hot, and them just kissing and all; delicious! Gah, I'm in a crazy happy mood after reading this! Cliff-hanger; yes. But it's not a horrible one and just makes us readers hungry for more! Keep it comin'