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this story is so gooood i really really hope that you update soon and dont just leave it were it is and abandon it!!!! i really hope there is more to come and if so can you email me on cardargo89@hotmail.com...or email me to let me know at least wether you are going to continue or if you are going to leave it!!!! thanx :)

Man Tim is so confused; he should really drop Brandon. Tis not doing him any good. I though he would end up with Ryan to get over that and start a normal relationship, but this chapter was a moot point to that. Really Tim.... Too bad this isn't updated anymore. I would love to see how it ends.

Hey, I've been reading this story and I have to say, it is fucking fantastic. I love the thought process of the main character as well as the reactions of the people around him. Best of all, I think, is the hot sex scenes you slip in. I hope you update more! I can't wait to find out more of what will come from this relationship(?) with the guy in the alley. I also want to know what will happen to Ryan. Most of all, what will happen with Brandon?!

Uh-oh. I hope this doesn't turn into an AIDS story, although it seems that Brandon will turn out to have it. Will we ever find out what turned him into such a bitter person? Something having to do with Michael, I assume...Michael...I keep wondering if Tim was actually abused/raped by Michael, which is why he's so odd, but forgot about it due to the trauma. I would also prefer to see Tim and Ryan end up together, 'cause Tim has had enough of shadowing/adoring/being a slave to/wasting his life on Brandon. However, I also want Brandon to 'get better' and end up happily in love with someone (Matt? Bailey?). Anyway, you can tell I'm enjoying the story and the characters, cause I actually care what happens to them. Thanks for that and continue writing! ;O)

Why Brendon works at the shop if he was the top pupil in the school? And you mentioned he went to college.

Came to see if may have updated and only now saw you have a mailing list! I'd love if you email me at stve3@yahoo.com

Thank you :D

Wow. Okay, well I love what you have written so far. Now...do you plan to finish it? You really really should, cuz this story is the love of my life right now. :P Anyway, I really hope you add more soon. :) And I would definitely like to be added to your emailing list for this story so that I know when you decide to update.

update pweaaaaaaase!!!

AHAHAHAHAHA! That was hilarious! *wipes eyes* Awesome chapter! I love how Ryan looked all confused that Tim's mom knew his name, yet he seemed kind of happy. :P It makes me a little curious about him though. Well, I'm glad that there's more chapters for me to read, because I have a feeling that this won't be the last of Ryan's role in this story, and I want to find out more about him. Anyway, I just had to stop here and let you know what I thought. :D

This story really needs to be updated. keep them new chapters coming please I want to know what will happen next!