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Omg Timmy, Timmy, Timmy, what are you doing???? And Brandon you stupid fuck! You're just gonna let this young, innocent, NAIVE kid go with your drug dealer??? I just pray this Cal guy (who does seem pretty nice I must admit, lol) is good to Timmy.

And Timmy, you're a jerk too. You're so damned obsessed with Brandy the Bitch that you can't see you have an awesome guy right in front of you. Ryan would never treat you like Brandon. Ugh I just wanna smack them all upside their heads. lol

Which only means that your writing is fantastic! :) I'm so sorry I finished all twenty-one chapters! I'm optimistic though that I won't have to wait four years for another one. lol

This is such a fantastic work of fiction I just can't get enough. I'm gonna be checking AFF every day now for the next chapter. =)

I actually think that Brandon cares for Timmy.
I think he was throwing himself on Cal's sword
for Timmy! HA! We will see!!!!!

i had given up all hope that my poor little stalker boy would every have a happy ending. but your back. hopefully to stay. and wow i didnt expect that i wonder if brandon is coming back or if tim is going to go threw fucking tall and sexy. bade brandon look at him a bitt diff huh? i do so hope that you update soon.

Why yes, I have followed this story since you went on hiatus, no worries though I only worried forever you were really gone ;_____;
God, this story is great. It's so creepily perfect I love it

OOOOh MYYY GOOOODDDD <3
Your back! Hell yes!
I dont know what it is about this story but I love it! Its believable and scary, borderline psychotic but still sexy with enough smut to satisfy your fans (me me me).
Thank you for sharing this story! :)
Could I be included in your mailing list? Please and thank you!

pls... i'm begging I really, really like tim so plsssssssssssssssss. let him end up with anyone but brandon... I really hate him sooooooooooooo mucccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhh. i'm also excited about the new character because he seems interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wish and I fervently hope that he will end up with tim... I'm hoping that cal might have a bigger role to play in the story and in tim's life.... so plssssssss

Yblue: I read the first sixteen chapters last night. Actually I finished chapter sixteen at three a.m. Now I'm continuing. I just wanted to tell you what a fantastic story this is! I am captivated by your storytelling. For not being a native English speaker/writer, you have an excellent command of the English language. I've read stories on here from native English speakers who couldn't write for shit. So kudos to you.

I love your characters. Timmy, so shy, so insecure and full of infatuation for Brandon. Brandon collects lovers like people collect coins. He said he doesn't do love. Maybe that's b/c Michael screwed with his mind so much he can't love himself and therefore how could anyone else? Maybe he'll realize that even though he told Timmy to stop stalking him, he'll wind up missing it. After all, isn't Timmy the only one who keeps coming back?

And Ryan; he's so sweet and innocent and now Timmy broke his heart. Timmy doesn't even realize he's Ryan's Brandon. Ryan's been watching him for years, right?

Ok, well I'm sure my "review" is way outdated since you're already on chapter 21! lol

But I just had to write and let you know what an awesome job you're doing with this story! Ok, on to chapter seventeen! :)

Chapter 21

Triumphant return to AFF!!!!!
Glad your back with Timmy and Brandon!

Seriously HOT chapter! Has it been four years?!

No way! (I have been awaiting your return!)

Thanks for this chapter!

R

Somehow your main character is fucked up, creapy and very loveable. I don't like Brandon even if he seemed to have an intresting past, one that probebly explains a lot...
I love your story - it's captivating! Hope your going to update soon.
lg Marlod

You've enthralled me since the beginning with this interesting concept on a relationship. It would be great to see you continue on with this story plot line because I would be ecstatic to know what happens next to our cute little stalker. :) Maybe some jealousy issues between Brandon and this new stranger? ;3