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He should of kick him before he ran! Jerk!! Awesome story btw. I really hope there is a happy ending.:)

I'm not sure who is more pathetic. Tim or Brandon? Probably Brandon. Ryan is honestly lucky not to end up with that hot mess.

Oops I meant Tim. Definitely Tim.

Finally got around to reading your story and I just love it! It was so interesting to see Tim change over time to be more assertive and commanding. Although I didn't like how he had to share Brandon with other guys in the end I felt like he should have him all to himself. But I'm glad it all worked out for him in the end. Your writing was great and I loved the easy flow that your words had. Seriously a great story with amazing depth to the characters and it was interesting to see the point of view from a character whose not exactly right in the head. Gives you a new perspective for things. I'm probably going to be amazed with the story for awhile and will reread it a bajillion times. Amazing job I can't wait to see what else you give us!

That was such a great story! I read this in one go and I really enjoyed reading this. I really fell in love with this story! Seriously, I couldn't express how much I love this fic. I just wish there would be a sequel for this. I'm dying for some Tim/Brandon sweet romantic moments! I hope you could find the time and inspiration to write it! :) Because really, you got me wanting for more! I'm pretty sure it would take time for me to get over this awesome story! :)

What a sweet ending, Yblue! :)

Wow, I can't believe Tim has been living with Brandon for so long!

I'll tell you, I give Tim a helluva lot of credit; I could NEVER just stand there and watch the one I loved with someone else. And that Rob guy wasn't even the first of the night! ELEVEN the week before??? Shit why does Brandon feel the need to be 'used' by so many guys? Why can't Tim be enough for him?

I do like the changes I see in Tim as well as Brandon. I noticed Brandon is sweeter with Tim now, he's speaking nicely to him and being very affectionate with him. Tim is definitely good for Brandon; he stabilizes him I think. I would like to see Brandon being less of a slut in the future though. :)

Awesome, awesome story Y! :)

Maybe your next story can be about Ryan and his college assistant? ;)

Great chapter!! I'm really glad that Tim reach his goal at last.
You did a great job. This is one of the best stories I've read
so far. Thank you!!!

I sat down and read all thirty-three chapters straight. That's how much I liked it that I couldn't break away. :) Very well done. I have to admitt I didn't care for Brandon at all at first, but once you started telling his story and showing glimpses of the reason he is that way it made perfect sense and fit so well. A very honest look at the resulting side-effects of childhood sexual abuse. Overall a good, steamy, entertaining read. And I also want to add that Ryan is my favorite, even though he's a supporting character. :) He's so fucking adorable and probably everything I love in a gay fictional character that it made my brain melt. And the almost sex scene ruined by his little brother.... UGH. I freaking died. You MUST write a side story with Ryan losing his cherry to the medical assistant. Oh my God...I think me and many other fans of his would love you forever. :) I mean come on, he's too precious to just throw to the wind, don't you agree? ;)

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Awesome ending, darling. I enjoyed a lot reading this and I'm sure you're going to btter and better while writing :D

Thank you for this wonderful story! I love it from beginning to this awesome epilog. If you ever choose to write a sequel or more epilog like chapters - I'm game