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for Pack

by ElfNight

person s_hill2188@yahoo.com
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I loved it.
person nyth wolf
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the first chapter was kinda slow but the last two chapters were great i can't wait to see what happen next really so please update soon PLEASE!!!!!
person Suzie
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a good story. I loved the fight they had to go through first; it was awesome
person Nyteowl
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I'm so glad you updated. That was fantastic! Hopefully you'll update soon.
person Kathy
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. I love it. Can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry - quit after the mention of high-school and m-preg.

Guess I'm just too old....
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful
person Kaay-chan
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
............Ya know what? just re-read my past two reviews (specifically the parts where I tell you that I love this story and it's amazing,) and that'll pretty much sum up how I feel right now. Update soon! *is looking foreward to Z's reaction to the whole situation XD)
person Civako
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! wonderful story!
person Kaay-chan
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!! You can't end it like that! You can't! I! MUST! READ! MORE!

Update soon! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeas!!!!!!! I really really love this. You have a lot of tallent! I mean that. So please! Update soon!