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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
are you going to updaate before another month goes by.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finaly! but i wish there was more but beggers can't be choosers. thank you for finally updating and i hope you can write more soon cause i really want to see Tyler and Bahri to be together. but don't get me wornge i want to see those two and there little mating.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
come on its deen a month already. i want more.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more, i want more now. pleeeeaaaassssee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more soon i want to see what happens between bahri and brian.
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm this reminds me of of a drug hazed dream.
not bad or anything. just very unclear.
hint: put a space between lines.
easier to read and makes everything clearer.
i like it. update?
-ero
not bad or anything. just very unclear.
hint: put a space between lines.
easier to read and makes everything clearer.
i like it. update?
-ero
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooooooooooooo goood...........Plz continue writng...........I love it seriously..........
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...What do I think of this story? Well...I like it! XD I do think that you guys need uhm...a little work on the interaction thing and how to go to one scene to the next, but what do I know? ^_^; *bonks self on the head* Anyways, I do hope you continue this story...Bahri sounds oh so delicious. Update soon please, and I also have to mention that the plot it very good, I have never read anythinbg like it. But I do have a question, what does 'of age' mean? How old are they anyways? 18? Like the normal legal age? ^_^