rate_review Reviews

Now I read the chapter 4, the writing is good. Not sure where you're going. Olivia will probably play a big role in this? Or then I might be wrong, but he is haunting her and she seems like someone we need to worry about. Anyway, I'll wait for the next chapter.

I really like the story. Though I get it's about them not being able to express their love for eachother in public, try making another plot for the story. But other than that it was a really good story, I always had a thing for vampires so that was a bonus for this story. Keep going!
~miko_babe987

still love but in your last line it should be "had decided" not decided. update soon.

This is an amazing story. Admitedly, I am biased because I love vampires and write about [gay] vampires and so on and so forth, but still, this is really good.

But if you're going to make your chapters that short, you're gonna have to update more. Really, that's my only complaint. So...yeah. Update soon, please! I really love this story.

i love vampire stories with human lovers. the sneaking around adds a nice touch too. love it. hope you update soon.