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CHAPTER 6
A doggy biscuit? I hope it's fresh, I hate the stale ones, hehe. I do like this fic, Kitsune.

So, Cheza is not exactly straight or what?

It's horrible that a child was taken from the bookshop, poor Bain is not going to handle this well. He never moved away from the city they found him in? So, the Protector might live close to his surviving victim's business without any of them being any wizer? This is pretty twisted. Wonder what you'll do with that.

Whoa....I like!....
So is Bain going to help the police with their inquiries now? And what of his newly blossoming love affair?...Is that going to go smoothly?...I don't think so somehow!
Nice work. A few spelling mistakes...but nothing to worry about, or take away from the story...

O__O update!

CHAPTER 4
Hi, Kitsune. Lovely story, now I have two fics that I read in this section, 'The Werewolf Chronicles' and 'The Protector of children':)
Your story is really well written and believable. Love all the characters and the dog. You seem to be able to write POV of a victim and POV of a villain very well, many people can only do one for some reason.

Very good job:)

Thank you.

WTF?? ... ha, kidding. this is like one of those sicko movies that your sickened from but have to watch it anyways...were all sickos.. anyways, i hope you keep it progressing and end it with the bad guy getting emasculated.

A really well written story - well done.
I like his dog - good dog.

:) I quite enjoyed that. Update please?

I found your writing style unique, and despite what the story's about, I actually smiled a few times, like the stuffing dog in part...hehehe

I think this could be a wonderful story and I'll be keeping an eye on it.

I really like Bain already.

And your bad guy is just so wacked...

Very good!