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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chap 11
I didn't know you updated already, sometimes I forget everything but the slashy section.
angst with sexual tension then sexual tension with angst, big dogs rule and Bain is scared and backing off...well, just a few more chapters?
This one was a good filler chapter, written well as were all the rest, but I crave more...damnit more...you evil author.
I didn't meeeean it. Good author. *pats head* *pats sloan for good measure*
I want sicko caught, I want children freed and I want my cute Bain to succumb to more than a romp with the handsome cop. Me begging is not a pretty sight. Don't let it happen! I will now check EVERY SINGLE DAY.
I love your story.
I didn't know you updated already, sometimes I forget everything but the slashy section.
angst with sexual tension then sexual tension with angst, big dogs rule and Bain is scared and backing off...well, just a few more chapters?
This one was a good filler chapter, written well as were all the rest, but I crave more...damnit more...you evil author.
I didn't meeeean it. Good author. *pats head* *pats sloan for good measure*
I want sicko caught, I want children freed and I want my cute Bain to succumb to more than a romp with the handsome cop. Me begging is not a pretty sight. Don't let it happen! I will now check EVERY SINGLE DAY.
I love your story.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa this is a great story. I'm glad I read this one first today. Cheza better be nicer to Bain he's too cutie for him. AND DEATH to Micaville the f***ing bastard.
Slone is so cool I bet anyone that reads this story wishs for a dog like that. lol
Slone is so cool I bet anyone that reads this story wishs for a dog like that. lol
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update! I want the basterd caught, turtured, and put away!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
Poor Bain...having feelings of jealousy...
And how dangerous is it getting for him now...his former abductor and rapist is starting to put two and two together...and it's not going to take him very much longer to come up with four...and then Bain is really going to be in serious trouble...
Poor Bain...having feelings of jealousy...
And how dangerous is it getting for him now...his former abductor and rapist is starting to put two and two together...and it's not going to take him very much longer to come up with four...and then Bain is really going to be in serious trouble...
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter two
Finally got back to this, I forgot to bookmark it, so until I saw it, I forgot, sorry...
and so much done on it!
This chapter was GREAT...talk about suspense building. I love the dog, too.
Poor Bain. At least he survived, sounds like not many do.
You got the creepiness of the psycho down really good, too.
I'm loving this story more and more...
Finally got back to this, I forgot to bookmark it, so until I saw it, I forgot, sorry...
and so much done on it!
This chapter was GREAT...talk about suspense building. I love the dog, too.
Poor Bain. At least he survived, sounds like not many do.
You got the creepiness of the psycho down really good, too.
I'm loving this story more and more...
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three
Ah ha... *grins*
They getting to like each other. Great image, Bain falling into Travers arms.
I like the pairing, if it is one *keeps fingers crossed*
Sloane (hug)
Okay, gotta read more, catch the monster soon, I hope.
Great chapter
Ah ha... *grins*
They getting to like each other. Great image, Bain falling into Travers arms.
I like the pairing, if it is one *keeps fingers crossed*
Sloane (hug)
Okay, gotta read more, catch the monster soon, I hope.
Great chapter
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
Somehow I'd missed it, that these two had shops close together. Why don't they recognize each other?
Guess I'll find out. Bain probably looks alot different, but the old guy wouldn't...
Would he? Off I go...
Another wonderful, suspenseful well written I loved it and want more chapter. I'm hooked.
Somehow I'd missed it, that these two had shops close together. Why don't they recognize each other?
Guess I'll find out. Bain probably looks alot different, but the old guy wouldn't...
Would he? Off I go...
Another wonderful, suspenseful well written I loved it and want more chapter. I'm hooked.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 and 6
*grin*
Me likey.
Alot.
Poor Bain. I never caught that he could be Lance from the first part.
You have so much interesting in this, so much plot that's why I'm missing things. I'm not used to that. The story is progressing just right, not too fast or slow, your making me care more and more for the characters, all of them which I usually don't, but you make them so real. Except the sicko, of course.
Wow. I mean it, I find some real talent on this site, like professional and now I add you to that short list. I am still amazed by it.
Have I thanked you yet? You're fantastic.
*grin*
Me likey.
Alot.
Poor Bain. I never caught that he could be Lance from the first part.
You have so much interesting in this, so much plot that's why I'm missing things. I'm not used to that. The story is progressing just right, not too fast or slow, your making me care more and more for the characters, all of them which I usually don't, but you make them so real. Except the sicko, of course.
Wow. I mean it, I find some real talent on this site, like professional and now I add you to that short list. I am still amazed by it.
Have I thanked you yet? You're fantastic.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
I almost cried. I love Travers so much. What a great story. I have research and other things I should be doing, but I'm so damn hooked I have to read more and it's all your fault! Must you be so damn good? What a story. Well written, angsty, comforting, romantic, a bit funny, has a dog in it...hot guys. And it's a thriller. Perfect.
It has a couple minor spelling or omission errors, they don't really bother me, but if you ever want anyone to fix them please don't be afraid to ask. I'd be happy to read this over and do that, no prob. That aint something I usually offer to do. If not that's fine. I'm still going to read it a second time!
THANK YOU for this story.
I almost cried. I love Travers so much. What a great story. I have research and other things I should be doing, but I'm so damn hooked I have to read more and it's all your fault! Must you be so damn good? What a story. Well written, angsty, comforting, romantic, a bit funny, has a dog in it...hot guys. And it's a thriller. Perfect.
It has a couple minor spelling or omission errors, they don't really bother me, but if you ever want anyone to fix them please don't be afraid to ask. I'd be happy to read this over and do that, no prob. That aint something I usually offer to do. If not that's fine. I'm still going to read it a second time!
THANK YOU for this story.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 8 and 9 and 10
No more chapters =( Not to mention a rather evil cliffhanger.
it was so perfect, just enough smut to get the whole image down, then hold off on it. Some authors who don't know any better but should, rush into it, (yes me) and I think its definitely better for the reader like this.
They are remembering each other and I can't wait to see how you bring them together and how Bain handles it. That...Kerry? is so annoying, slap that...I mean her out of the story. =) Okay, I will. Although it is funny she thinks she turned him gay. *smirk*
She's worse than Alan, who also annoys me, but I like him cuz he stuck with Bain and gave him someone to confide in.
I must now shamelessly beg for more chapters as soon as possible. Or before that is fine as well.
I love your story.
*pats Sloan on the head* see, I reviewed, don't bite me.
No more chapters =( Not to mention a rather evil cliffhanger.
it was so perfect, just enough smut to get the whole image down, then hold off on it. Some authors who don't know any better but should, rush into it, (yes me) and I think its definitely better for the reader like this.
They are remembering each other and I can't wait to see how you bring them together and how Bain handles it. That...Kerry? is so annoying, slap that...I mean her out of the story. =) Okay, I will. Although it is funny she thinks she turned him gay. *smirk*
She's worse than Alan, who also annoys me, but I like him cuz he stuck with Bain and gave him someone to confide in.
I must now shamelessly beg for more chapters as soon as possible. Or before that is fine as well.
I love your story.
*pats Sloan on the head* see, I reviewed, don't bite me.