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It love this story!

*xhecks latest update* *pouts* I want more. Like now. And that Todd-guy is giving me the bloody creeps.

Thanks for the update alert!

Chapter 13

*grin* well, it wasn't exactly a tender sweet love scene (put FallOutBoy This Ain't a Scene into my head for some reason) but they're bonding...and Sloane seems to be grudgingly if ya can't beat em join em so that's good.

Even tho that evil killer is still planning to get Bain back, that won't be as easy as snatching up little kids is.

*pat on head to Sloane, review to Shippa* okay, did my part, write more soon please...

Mitts

Guests? By that, I take it the bad guy is going to kidnap someone else along with Bain?...Could it be Travers, by any chance? And just how is he going to do that?...It'll be interesting to see...
Nice to see Bain and Travers got it together..even if the dog did his upmost to stop it, lol...
Hope to see an update soon..

I just found this story and it is turning out to be really good. Bain is so lovable in that annoying kind of way and Travers is definitley adorable. I have a bad feeling about 'Papa'. I hope he is caught before poor Bain is hurt. Travers almost had him!! I hope he doesn't do anything to the kids before the cops come back with the search warrent!!! Poor babes. Anywho, please update soon! The suspense is killing me!

Chapter 12

*sigh* so I can't check every day. I'm not that organized.

I like Alan, trying to help his friend

But now the monster knows.

If you don't mind...I hope...one thing that seemed strange...the search warrant. Okay, heres why, cops would ask if it was okay to search without one, with owners permission they can search, then if he says no, goes and gets one. Especially since they both had some strange feeling that things weren't right. This is a child murderer and rapist, I can't imagine them being so lax about it, giving him time to either move the kids or even panic and kill them...see what I mean? Not to mention someone innocent who really wants this monster caught would almost insist they search while they were there, just so they didn't have to waste more time coming back that could be spent on other leads...

I want to whine about not having Bain and Alan together but I'm afraid Sloane is already growling at me for above...*niiiice doggy* they were close, so close...I gotta hear what Alan says to him after hearing the phone conversation.

Any chance of getting email about updates? xxxluckeeexxx@aol.com

If not, that's okay, but I do love your story and don't like missing it...but I'll always find it eventually.

Love and hugs, K

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!

Update god damnit! :P
Btw.. you need a beta, no offense or anything.. just alot of typos
If you're interested email me (or add me)
initial_retaliation@hotmail.com

Damn Casy and her big mouth! Now Bain is going to be in serious trouble!!! Evil Mr.Micaville knows it's Lance now...and he's going to get him back and finish off the job...And the cops have accidently tipped him off, and have given him twenty four hours to hide all evidence of the kids he's got! Ahhhhhhhh...

Mitts

Utt oh....I smell trouble ahead if Bain takes Sloan out for a walk...I think the bad guy is waiting for him, to finish what he started!
Will Cheza be there to save him? I hope so...I hate it when the bad guy wins...