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for Rhyss

by Akamizdr3am

schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for those who don't like this story... It was written from imagination and short time I'll be sure to try harder on my next chapter. Again sorry...
person summerdragon
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pick a verb tense. Just one. Then stick to it.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why are you writing everything as if it WOULD happen? Is this a hypothetical? Or is it supposed to be a real story?