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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE F*** WAS THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! you were'nt kidding when you said that this chapter was different from the first!!! BUT C'MON, the dude's f***ing his "beloved Kellie's" mom!!! but anyways, update soon.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would I be correct in thinking you're assuming Spawn...?
If so, nah. That's not the case... though I do need to work on the description of him, don't I. I think I've centered on his thoughts a little bit much...
Thanks very much for your review. I sincerely appreciate your comment. It really means a lot.
I've just got home from working nearly twelve hours, and I'm dead tired... I work in construction, too, so it's been a LONG ass day, so I most likely won't get much wrote. Apologies.
But again, thank you very much. I hope I can keep you entertained for many more chapters.
If so, nah. That's not the case... though I do need to work on the description of him, don't I. I think I've centered on his thoughts a little bit much...
Thanks very much for your review. I sincerely appreciate your comment. It really means a lot.
I've just got home from working nearly twelve hours, and I'm dead tired... I work in construction, too, so it's been a LONG ass day, so I most likely won't get much wrote. Apologies.
But again, thank you very much. I hope I can keep you entertained for many more chapters.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you guys enjoy the new chapter! Yeah, it's a bit extreme in some aspects, but I never wanted this story to be a light hearted romance, and I'm going to prove there has been no pulled punches.
Thanks for the reviews, as it really helped me get the initiative to write... Along with some good ole hardcore pornography!
Expect maybe a chapter a week, as I do have a job and Christmas coming up. I'm leaving for a couple of days, most likely a week for St. Louis, Missouri, and I do not know if there will be a computer, so don't expect anything until around the 30th.
Thanks for the reviews, as it really helped me get the initiative to write... Along with some good ole hardcore pornography!
Expect maybe a chapter a week, as I do have a job and Christmas coming up. I'm leaving for a couple of days, most likely a week for St. Louis, Missouri, and I do not know if there will be a computer, so don't expect anything until around the 30th.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Three hundred hits and two reviews...I'm disappointed that no one else actually had the patience to give you kudos, hon. Great second chapter.
A couple of things, first and foremost:
1. In my opinion, you didn't have to worry at all about it seeming rushed. Considering the...tempo, shall we say, of this chapter, the fact that it seemed rushed to you just happened to add to the story. It may have been an accident, but it worked in your favor.
2. Grammar and spelling aside (I noted a few spelling mistakes), how come I have a feeling that a certain emeral-eyed anti-hero with a red cloak with a mind of its own immediately pops into mind? If that's the case, you might want to either transfer the story to a different category, or note that this was inspired by the aforementioned movie.
In any event, you continue to amaze me. Keep up the good work!
A couple of things, first and foremost:
1. In my opinion, you didn't have to worry at all about it seeming rushed. Considering the...tempo, shall we say, of this chapter, the fact that it seemed rushed to you just happened to add to the story. It may have been an accident, but it worked in your favor.
2. Grammar and spelling aside (I noted a few spelling mistakes), how come I have a feeling that a certain emeral-eyed anti-hero with a red cloak with a mind of its own immediately pops into mind? If that's the case, you might want to either transfer the story to a different category, or note that this was inspired by the aforementioned movie.
In any event, you continue to amaze me. Keep up the good work!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really, really good! hope you're other stories are as good as this one was!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The writing was great, and you had me hooked the entire time.
I wonder, though, if you're going to add most or all of those other ratings in future installments, or if you did that to grab attention.
In any event, good job. Keep up the good work!
I wonder, though, if you're going to add most or all of those other ratings in future installments, or if you did that to grab attention.
In any event, good job. Keep up the good work!