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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was intriguing and very hot, and really good, almost poetic writing. Except for the last few paragraphs. The huge Mpreg turn off. (well for me anyway) I still decided to review because I very much enjoyed your first chapters. I won’t read further though and I advise putting the Mpreg warning in your summary.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Yblue - MPreg is a total turn-off for me. Put it in your summary.