rate_review Reviews

i really really like this story and i would really really love and hope for you to continue with this story and finnish it.... it just has sooo much untold potential.... i love it!!

"A guy with a gun jumped out and grabbed Seth from behind."

OMG THATS SO FUCKING RANDOM I LOVE YOU! XD

I have not yet read the story, I'm about to but I first wanted to draw attention to your warnings in the synopsis, for it is very long and actually repetitive.

Anal,Angst,BDSM,B-Mod,Bond,Fist,H/C,HJ,Humil,Language,Lemon,Lime,MaleDom,Minor,N/C,OC,Oral,Original,Rim,S&M,Shonen-Ai,Shouta,Slave,Tort,Violence,Yaoi

First off: Bond and S&M are already stated with BDSM. BDSM means bondage, domination/submission, and sado-masochism.

Second: OC, Original. I would never have guessed... especially with this being in the Original section.

Second: Lemon and lime. If it's both, combine them and say, citrus.

It just makes the warning a whole lot easier to skim through.

I'm sorry, I didn't read your story yet, but I'm just letting people know that when they use all those warnings, you can't read them without scrolling the page sideways. It would be nice to just have the major ones and the rest inside so you can check pages without going back and forth. Thank you for not minding me writing this. I wish the site would fix it, but they don't so only the authors can.

I remember reading this story awhile back, was it a year ago? Hm, anyway, I liked it then and I still do, I think you should continue, I want to know what happens to them.

I'm sorry to hear about your mother... Very understandable that you'd be sad and angry.

I DO like your story. The few errors I see don't spoil it. Please keep writing.

I 'escape' in fiction. Your work makes my life better.

Wow! I think this story has great potential so don't stop.

The story is actually pretty good - but your attitude sux. Readers are not LAZY because they want a story to be readable. With understandable grammar and spelling.

I'm not even sure what term to use about an author who takes so little pride in their work that they put something out for others to read that is full of errors.

At any rate, you seem to have fixed many things in this story - for which I am grateful.