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for angel and demon

by funguy8169

person Louk
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, absolutely fantastic.
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Oh my indeed. I loved this! Loved the following...

Use of non-typical objects to hypnotize, attention to scent (the cream, the candles, cologne, awesome!)
Attention to detail, descriptions.
Her conversion to a succubi at the end--- HOT!

I write hypno-game stuff. You should take a look at some of my stories- I find that you might enjoy them.