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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pokes* Why haven't you updated this in sooooo long?! I just found it and I want to read more. Please update
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More? Please? Your writing is great, and your style is enjoyable. I've read the story twice, and I loved it both times. So, more about these two girls, and this club? Pretty please?!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I gotta say, this is a good story. It's well written, teases, and is pretty hot over all. I've just got one issue... I want MORE! Please. ^_^
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOWEEE! I cant wait for the next chapter!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story I just have to know what Maya got her into. :)
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's rather quite good :D
I herby call for you to continue as it has been going! 10/10, best Original yet.
I herby call for you to continue as it has been going! 10/10, best Original yet.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE GIVE IT TO HER .. sorry its hot keep going
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no - has she just signed her life away.....
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good story. panting all over, hehe. keep writing!
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I'm trying to figure out the addition thing and i can't wait for an update...