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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow cool please please update soon!!! Or maybe I should write please continue?
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Whoa . . .
Keep writing this!!! It's awesome!
Keep writing this!!! It's awesome!
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story but a little dissapointed about the lack of descriptions. I mean you never said what the room looked like or what they look like. I would very much appreciate it if you just add what their wearing, what they look like, and how tall they are in comparision to each other.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm...Arden gave in just a little too easily for me...I thought he might have put up just a little bit of a fight...
Oh.....and why was Arden, who was obviously not born a slave, bought at a slave auction?...Was he captured by someone...and if so, why?
Oh.....and why was Arden, who was obviously not born a slave, bought at a slave auction?...Was he captured by someone...and if so, why?
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice - Tiric definitely won that round. (Actually, he wins them all, doesn't he?)
And poor little Adren - being such a nice, polite slave-boy. Your desciptions of the pain-filled pleasure was superb.
I do hope Adren doesn't become addicted to the pleasure too soon. And continues to fight - at least against himself.
A delicious Christmas present. Thank You!
And poor little Adren - being such a nice, polite slave-boy. Your desciptions of the pain-filled pleasure was superb.
I do hope Adren doesn't become addicted to the pleasure too soon. And continues to fight - at least against himself.
A delicious Christmas present. Thank You!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes,I really like this first chapter. Couple of questions though...How old is Arden?...And what is the age difference between him and Tiric?
Looking forward to your next update...
Looking forward to your next update...
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ansolutely delicious. Just what I needed to start my day.