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I absolutely adore your stories~!
You should make this little one shot into a story~!
I know I'd read it.
<3
;thumbs up;
Awesome job.

This is more then HOT!! Demon smex is the best!!! I loved this oneshot!
It's one of the best! Man, u gotta write some more! I love ur writing style!

I've just realized...is your title a play on words? "Come--ing Home"? Eh? Eh?

Sorry.

Either way, the overwhelming level on smut in this story is both baffling and delightful! I certainly hope there's a sequel to this very hot idea!

*drool*

*drool* Well hello, you reviewed ma fic and I decided to take a look at yours, and I'm glad I did. O_O The story is very interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing where you go with it. Muhaha :D

Wow! That was hot! I liked the fact that you took some time to show the reader a little about Jaro, his history, and the world he lives in. Those details gave the story a sense of realism that made the sex even hotter. And while I shouldn't need to praise an author for getting their spelling and punctuation right (because they should take care of that before posting, although too few do), your grammar was impeccable, and it helped make the story a real pleasure to read.

Did I mention that the sex was really hot? *Wink*

I do have one tiny suggestion -- and I only noticed a thing like this because most of the story is executed with such skill. You wrote "As though his mouth were making fun of him..." I think "mocking" would be a better description. "Making fun of" is a bit unwieldy and seems wrong for the medieval setting.

Thanks for a great read!

Love,
Falcon

I think you should continue. Its a wonderful story and the most well written that I have seen in AGES!! Please continue or write more!
Erier ^.~

What did I think? I LOVED it! It’s not everyday I run across a story that has me hooked from the first sentence and this one certainly did. It’s got definite potential for a longer series, if you ask me. I’ll think on it for a while and let you know if I think of some useful suggestions for a continuous plotline (don’t hold your breath though, as plot bunny sightings have been rare around here >_<). I can’t say that I’ve read anything of the like before and your writing is truly amazing – descriptive and enthralling. I, for one, would be overjoyed to see this continue into something more. If not, it’s still a great piece of writing. Thanks so much for sharing it ^_~