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for Haunted

by ElfNight

person The w00t Girl
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was wonderful, beautifully done like you always do.

PS: Glad to see you are on adultfanfiction, I happily away for an update on Haunted.
person pierr
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is sounding very good XD never read a ghost story before. you have to continue this. sounds interesting. do i sense that this tripper guy had something to do with his death?? dunno if im looking too into it, but its got me interested.

update soon!!
person jess
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this so far and eric sounds hot! who's the ghost? must know! update soon!
person Sekre
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa awesome chapter!!!!! Great idea, can't wait for more :)
person Jaklyn Toki
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A) I think I'm in love with the nephew. He reminds me of this guy I met in a cafe once...*drools*
B) I can't wait for you to update! This seems really interesting, with a lot of subplots and the like. I'm curious to see where it goes! PLEASE update soon!

Loyally, Jaklyn Toki
person Anno
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting good start I'm interested to see where it's going. :)
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning, it really makes me want to read more of the story. :)
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!