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person doloris
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! Update soon
person Ana
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally think her mystery guy is Toby and it's pissing me of that she doesn't suspect it too. And then there's the fact that she's had at least 4 chances to find out his identity and still hasn't. Update soon. I'm curious to see if I'm right.
person SAPH*FIRE*BLUE-DIVA
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! You still have me hooked! I am sooo glad that you are already planning the next two chapters!
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*nods* I can see where you're goin, setting up the plot in this chapter. I'm also impressed with how you keep me puzzled as to Nine's identity. Normally, I'd have figured something like this about now. I noticed a few grammar bugs, though, but don't worry. I'm sure a beta or a spell/grammar checker can clear those up no prob.

Anyway, good job. You've kept me reading. Continue to do so!
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read Chapter Three, and you've really impressed me.

My e-mail is on my profile, as well as my MSN. Drop me a line as soon as you have an update!!!
person aquamum
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW
This is great
I like your story very much
person SAPH*FIRE*BLUE-DIVA
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You have me hooked. Is Toby the stranger? Or possibly her brother? I can't wait to find out!
person Mila J
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhhhh I love it! Please update can't wait to find out who "Nine" is lol!! nice story update asap =]
person doloris
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord!! I wish I had a stranger call number 10 LOL!!! Nah, but love the chapter.
Can't wait for more!!!
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I only read Chapter One thus far, but I'm definitely going to have to read more! Great job with this one!