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person Nothingness
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey another great chapter even though it didnt have like nothing to do with nine but it was great im still curious about who is "Nine" there are so many possibilities but yeah cant wait till the next chappie keep up the great work
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep going. this is great.
person patty
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story.it gets better with every chapter.please update soon.I am dying to know nine's identity.
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nothing like a filler chapter to renew interest and set up for another interaction with her mystery man.

Seriously, though, this chapter was well-written. Kudos as well to your beta.

Keep up the good work, both of you! I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.
person lady_k2007
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I love this story. It's the uncle isn't it? Just a guess. Can't wait til the next chap. Keep it comin'.
person Cassidy
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. I wish you'd update soon. To add my two cents to everyone else's guesses, I'm guessing that Nine is a teacher. Mostly because of the 'sort of' goes to her school comment. An adult would also want to keep things secret and...well it covers the 'older' answer too. If I was going to make a crazy guess, something unlikley but would totally take everyone from left field...I'd say her brother Kenneth. But for now I'm sticking with the teacher deal.
Now throw us a bone!
person doloris
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK. I was trying to figure out, like everybody else, who's this Nine guy. I have so many people that I can pick, but I think I might be wrong on all of them. Love the story and pleeeeease update so more don't put it off.
person Nothigness
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story i find it intersting because u actually make an atmosphere of romance but like the mystery romance and so yeah its nice to read stories like this becasue it doesnt get u bored so at least for me its nice i like it no wait actually i love it and i can't wait until u post the next chapter and i think i have a suspicions about who can "Nine" be he said he was older and so i guess it can be someone from a Junior or Senior Yr. and i think its Toby cuz he is sweet and nice to her , Brian because he just suddenly started talking to her out of the blue and so yeah i think u get the point AND believ it or not i also think its Zeal (i think thats the name sorry if its not) and well i'll go and shut up because im probably borring u so yeah cant wait till the next chapter.. :) Bye,Bye..
person jadedmidnight
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's the 11th grade teacher isn't it? I guessed that when you first mentioned the glimpse she saw of him outside. I thought that because of how he said that he sort of went to her school when she asked him. That idea strengthened when she went into the upperclassmen hallway and caught a glimpse of him. I could be wrong, but I really think it's him. I guess I'll find out either way soon. Anyway, I'm really liking this story so far. Having them meet in the dark and her having no idea who he is yet just works. I can't wait to see what happens next and who Nine really is. Keep up the good work.

~Diana
person aquamum
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story - it's really goooood !!!!
I love her leaving him questions in her book and he leaving her the answers - cryptic as they are - hee hee
I love that she saw him at school too....