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OMG YESS!!! you had me so worried. I check this story for updates everyday!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I would love to get an idea of what things are going through Nine's head. Why is he pursuing Melissa, a student at his school and a 15 yr old girl? I wonder if you would be interested in posting a chappie from his point of view just so we can get an idea of what's going on with him. Hmm, I am also intrigued to know what is happening between Nine and Brian; it's obvious that they know what the other is doing, and I wonder who Melissa will end up with.

Hey well you were right this chapter has held me on until you update but maybe its because I keep rereading the story lol....anyway I do hope you update soon I would really like to see whats going to happen with melissa and nine...hope you get lots of inspiration to write the next chapter!!!!

Please UPDATE!!!!!!! T^T

I'm really enjoying this! I like who Nine turned out to be, or at least who he is related to. I hope you continue to share your talent.

Your killing me here LOL!!!! I'm seriously addicted to this story I think I'm going to have to go to rehab after you finish this story up :P I have to say it was good to see you have updated and good to know that it won't be 20 chapters long cause I don't think I can handle waiting so long for the story..anyways keep writing and hope you get inspired so you can update faster lol!!

Revealing Nine's identity really got me. I would have never guessed that! Please write more soon. +++

On a seperate note, I don't see why you had to apologize and change the words in your story for a complaining reviewer. She obviously doesn't understand that other people call each other names. And yeah, people do call other people "fat whores" if the person they don't like is... well, it doesn't matter if they're fat or not. IT'S LIFE. Anyway, I thought that was ridiculous. But you're a nice person for going out of your way.

Jeez.
Yeah. UPDATE SOON!

(aka munesanzun) YAY! I like your resolution for the new year... I fully support you in your decision. ^___^ *is excited for more* I'll be right there pestering you for more... This is a great story! I can't wait to see if she'll accept Brian's teacher uncle xD and I hope she does... but major awkward. xD i lurf it. *eagerly awaiting next chapter*

>_> on another note... I don't think you should apologize either for the "skinny bitch" comment... >_> that's your character's thought... We ALL know there are people out there that are like that... it may be a stereotype of sorts but there really are people like that. At LEAST 5 per high school, I'm sure. Anon's being silly thinking that there aren't... (society and the media suck) your character wasn't saying everyone with a size zero waist is a bitch, just the ones that treat her like crap and have the IQ of a peanut are. Your story is great the way it is... I wouldn't take offense if you changed it to fat bitch, but you're less likely to find one as a stereotype 'popular girlfriend' because they tend to be the ones shunned from the popular circles and teased. Same with the skinny ones are the ones that the fat are jealous of. ^___^ keep your story the way it is...

Jeebus...
This story has me on my toes, and the way you twisted things around to hide the true identity of Nine is brilliant.
It reminds of that movie, Dead Silence, in a way because of how it throws you off.
I'm truly in awe of this, it makes me smile in those little way only a good story can, yet pisses me off because Brian took her away from Nine after like... five minutes.
Though, you know it real life we'd all be freaking out screaming until our lungs burst from our mouths if we were locked in a closet with a mysterious guy kissing you.
Or maybe too frightened to scream?'
I'm not sure, but I know I might just be quite turned on because I do enjoy that adrenaline rush and fear you'd get.

But, yeah. Anyways.
Update! Please. I'll implode internally if you do not.


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--Styxx