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for Her First Time

by DarkertheDragon

person Slick
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Rawr. Well, okay I thought I would review, though I really shouldn't seeing as you didn't even bother to wrap up my christmas present! *scowl* But I am a nice person after all, so I thought, well, why not.

It's teh awesome. (you already know because I've read it before!) But yeah, very nicely written, hardly any mistakes and very hot!^^ You have a very erotic way of writing! Whee! <3 Keep it up!