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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, this is so good! i read through it all at once and am dying for more. the dialogue is witty and funny, the characters are so colorful, and the plot is very entertaining and addictive. this is really wonderful, i can't wait til the next chapter!!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intresting story you have going here. I don't see anything that needs changing because your writing and the plot are great. Please update soon.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Darkness , I don't come to Paranormal/Supernatural section very often but today I did out of boredom and-Wow! A pretty decent story! This is a very good start, hope that you will continue. I wish we had some more description on Joshua's looks, other then that this story looks very promising:)
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was totally awesome!! I must have more. I definitely like the humor and the story is very interesting! must have more soon!