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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is pretty damn brilliant! I've just got one more chapter to read but I'm going to bed so I thought I'd review now. lol. I can't wait to see where you are going with this story, and I hope you bring back Bird. I liked Bird... Was Bird a he or a she?
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you get better with every story. Everyone's right, this is definatly going on the favorite story list. I'm evengoing to link it to my "don't read anything but a lemon" friend, cause even she's gonna like this. Maybe you should update it on your other sites :cough cough:
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
Hi, Darkness. So, Juniper looks like David Bowie from 'Labyrinth', hehehe! And what is it Joshua doing looking at his, er, 'bulge'? That was pretty funny. I like this chapter a lot, Joshua's conversation with Lliamy was very cute, she really is sharp for a six months old. Maybe their months are long, though. Wonder why she was unwanted, she is pretty cute so far-and she can find food! I really like this fic:)
Hi, Darkness. So, Juniper looks like David Bowie from 'Labyrinth', hehehe! And what is it Joshua doing looking at his, er, 'bulge'? That was pretty funny. I like this chapter a lot, Joshua's conversation with Lliamy was very cute, she really is sharp for a six months old. Maybe their months are long, though. Wonder why she was unwanted, she is pretty cute so far-and she can find food! I really like this fic:)
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! DAVID BOWIE GOBLIN KING!!! WOOOOOTTT!!!!! *bows* yet again another awesome chapter. I really like the concept of the unwanted forest and the suns and moon. Those are such neat ideas!! totally awesome!
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
Hi, Darkness, I really enjoyed this chapter. The 'Bird' conversation was very funny and creative. Did you make a list of everything Joshua said to write it? Pretty cool. I wonder about how people cross from one realm to another and how Joshua would even know in which direction to go. Is it a some sort of a test for him or something? Overall a very good read:D Thank you.
Hi, Darkness, I really enjoyed this chapter. The 'Bird' conversation was very funny and creative. Did you make a list of everything Joshua said to write it? Pretty cool. I wonder about how people cross from one realm to another and how Joshua would even know in which direction to go. Is it a some sort of a test for him or something? Overall a very good read:D Thank you.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story and very well written. The descriptions are specific enough to give you a mental picture and the characters are so original. I'm really enjoying your story and can tell a lot of thought and work went into this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope you update soon.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope the Bird comes back. It's very interesting character. please update!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you've just created my favorite story! Im totally captivated, and loving the size of your chapters! =p Honestly, this hasta be the most interesting story i've ever read, I cant wait for the next chapter! You have now officially made a loyal fan outta me lol! XD
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you!!!!! totally awesome chapter! must have more!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I couldn't stop reading it! once I started, I couldn't stop! hee hee, you are very imaginative^^ I really liked your story. it was fun to read^_^ please update soon!
~Raine~
~Raine~