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for Reality is Insanity

by Devilofdarkness

person aisha
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* I understand, computers always like to die when things are going good. Anyway, I shall wait! just hurry! ^_^
person nastyscarythingunderthebed
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-prays for comeputer- I hope it gets better soon, both for obviouse reasons and because you seem really sad about it...;_;
person Mino
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I hate it when my computer breaks down on me,
I wish you luck with that. I'll just wait atiently
untill your computer is fixed.
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sehr gute!
person Jacob Ryder
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOES! I love this story! *sells soul to satan in order to fix your computer*
person Mino
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the new character, he's very...spunky for lack of better word.
*brain is currently fried due to exams*
keep up the good work >.<
person aisha
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Must have more! and I absolutely love the new character addition!! can't wait
person sveta
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude.. you almost made me late for school today, ha! i saw there was a new chapter and knew i'd be going nuts if i had to go to my classes itching to know what was in the next chapter. so i had to furiously read the whole thing before 7am. that's what i get for surfing AFF in the morning hours! :P

i LOVE kael. i thought he would be this honorable, upstanding man of importance- but he's really a bounty hunter hunter who also harbors an attraction to poor joshua and is capable of being just as perverted as juniper. i felt so bad joshua got that sick; the scene was very descriptive, by the way. i wonder if that creepy blindfold guy is trying to incapacitate him so he can snatch him away? hmm. and i can't wait to meet this man who's the entire reason joshua is there and who apparently wants him for some dire reason!

and i just found out you also write "drowning in crimson", one of my favorites. can i bow before you now? :P :) can't wait for the next update!
person Jacob Ryder
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh! I can't believe you've brought in another dirty perv! I hope they both meet their ends quickly. I can't stand both of them. lol. I think you need another non-perv character. AND BRING BACK BIRD!
person nastyscarythingunderthebed
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! That advice was exceedingly helpful! I will defenatly keep that in mind 0.0

I love Kale!!!(sp?)He's adorable....poor Juniper though, even if they are friends ^^ that kidnaping scene was awsome by the way....I was worried the guy would get away with it...as wonderful an introduction it was I was also kind of hopeing that Juniper was going to save him...though I really knew better than that, lol.


I was so glad to see this new chapter up! I was checking it constantly ^^ I really can't wait for the next chapter!