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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person PA
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, it's all just so fucking obvious, with the songs and all, yet i myself never really got it. Hah. Really, really anticipating for the next chapter!
person TheGingerLady
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I as I bet meny othere LOVE your fic! In the last chap I held my berth it was so fucking nerv wreking! And you have made an exelent job with this chap! I look forward to the next one!
person Jane
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was freakin' perfect!
person meadowspeak
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im very impressed and this was such a good chapter.. i sooo love your writing style..Your an awesome writer!
Im so happy that i could cry.lol this was a very good chap. A good way to come to a close end..Im excited for whats to come next..I wonder if they will ever adopt? *thinking pose* That would be weird.
Sequel?
meadow
person Fallen
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 27-oh my gosh NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! please tell me they make ity threw this. o please o please!!!!!!!! benj needs to listen to him...
person NKFL
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, first off I want to say that I'm very impressed. You claimed not to be an author at the start of the story but I find this to be a particularly wonderful read. You've taken something that could be horribly cliche and turned it into an entertaining, addicting piece of work. Your writing style is fun to read, and I love the characters a lot. Please do keep writing and updating, and I, in turn, will continue to watch for new chapters.
person meadowspeak
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHHH!!!WooHoo!!! im so happy now..finally!! finally they are going to talk..its just so sweet that the band is completely for him.very romantic, and funny if you think about it. Dag is a total softy.hehe.thankz a bunch for this chapter.loved it!!UPDATE!!
meadow
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how happy you've made me. (LOTS OF LOVE TO YOU)!!!
person brainorgan
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I've reached the end of what you've written! It is quite captivating, very good work. I love the conversations (and the smut too of course!)
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm very much addicted to this story now..
it's well written, your characters are fantastic and it's sorta like i know them.
i can't wait for the next chapters!