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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person Shanna
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please just promise us that this will not be your only story. I have said it before and I will say it again, you have an awesome talent that should not be wasted. I would read any story you write because I like you style. I have you bookmarked so I can check everyday for the newest chapters, and even when this story ends I will be checking to see when you start up you next masterpiece.
person Wil
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For someone who claims to not be a writer, this is awesome.

And funny! I like the one-liners. If a story has me giving little snorts of amusement every few mimutes, I am a happy reader.
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm an excited for the last chapter...but also sad...this was a great story!
person brainorgan
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been thinking how much I like the character of Dagen - he's so tragic, hiding his love for so long - but it's not tragic now that he's gotten what he wanted - It's a very appealing story, thank you for writing it -
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the last chapter...please give us one more dag/ben lemon...please!!!!
person Jenna T.
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30 - Fuck. I think I'm crying. Yeah. I'm crying. I don't know what to say. It's hard to show glee through text. I just absolutely love your story so fucking much. What the hell am I gonna do without it? I don't know. I mean your story's amazing AND you update so fucking fast. That is sooo hard to find. Damn. I love you. Can we marry?
person Dragonfly
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that this is one of the best stories I have read in here. You have really fun and somehow fresh way of writing. Too sad that this is about to end but I think good stories have to end somewhere. If you are ever going to write more I will be (againg) your faitfull reader XD. Keep up the good work.

PS: I have fait in Benjamin but can Dagen ever forgive himself for being such a jerk? Well, I thik I will have to just wait for the next chapter ^o^
person Shanna
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cried. You are awesome!
person Shanna
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read chapters 1 and 2 after reading chapter 29 and knowing what we know now makes chapters 1 and 2 all the better. I really can't believe this is your first story, but I sure hope it isn't your last. You are VERY talented. I'm in love with your style and the characters, both of them even if I'm still made at Dagen. You made me have actual reactions to your charters and that is a sign of greatness. Please Update soon.
person Jenna T.
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29 - AWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I'm so fucking happy for them. And he finally realized! I don't know why I'm so forgiving. Usually I hate the character that fucked up for like the rest of a story. Hmmm... Oh well. I love you! Can we marry?