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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person Rosei
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! You're the best!
This has been a great read. I love
these two guys. You had me from chapter one.
All the best to you and yours.
Thanks again!

Rosei
person eroburn
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o omfg. i want a sequel. i demand a sequel. rawr!
sniffles. it was sooo cute.
and and Benji... should have tortured him some more.
grr!
but ... he is cute and huggly. and rawr
i cant believe u ended it.
great story. recommending to all my friends
person sarah
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well thank you for the story, really enjoyed reading it and it's a shame it's over so i'm glad you're already thinking of another! :)
person TheCagedRibbon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent. You are a fantastic author, capturing Ben's emotions perfectly. Bravo.

I can honestly say, that this is going in my favorites list.

Again, Bravo.

I cannot wait until your next story.
person meadowspeak
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!! love the story.hehe very very good.. please write soemthing else or do a sequel!?!
meadow
person Shanna
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate to see this story end, but I knew it would have to one day. You did an excellent job, and I will eagerly be awaiting the new story. Until then. . . .
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you really think it was cheesy? Whatever. (LOL) I was totally riveted, and I read it twice since I discovered it this week. Noble Dagen, but hiding it behind his bad behavior, you really nailed his character, and he was so easy to love. I love the voice of your narrator Benjamin, and I loved him too. So very good work, and I am looking forward to the next one!
person Jenna T.
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31 - I'm a total sucker for cheesy endings. And this is so odd. Morningwood - Take Off Your Clothes started playing RIGHT when it ended. Lmfao. It just made the ending better. Anywayssss, I totally worship you and your story and I can't WAIT for your next story. Because you're awesome and stuff. You're like...rocktastic. Rawkagely rawkin. Rawkegg. Okay. I'll stop now.
person jane
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was great!!!
Maybe you'll think of an editional Chapter 32...of a steamy lemon scene between dag and ben....please..just a thought!
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where are you........:)