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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, that was a good starting chapter. You gave of clear insight on all of the characters without boring the shit out me. I congradulate you because I may not be ADHD or ADD but I can get bored pretty easily.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You sure know how to write.
It has been a long time since I read something that was so wonderfully written.
Every single feeling and detail feels real.
This is what I want to be able to do. You rock!
It has been a long time since I read something that was so wonderfully written.
Every single feeling and detail feels real.
This is what I want to be able to do. You rock!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I read it whole today and it was pleasant to read... Even when I had a different idea over the following chapters. I'm quiet undergranted for writing reviews. So sorry for this one. Bye
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...I just read through the entire story in less than a twenty-four hour period. I really appreciated the humor, you had me literally laughing out loud quite a few times throughout the story. The descriptions were different from what I'm used to reading, and I liked that. All in all, definitely a story worth reading! More than once! ;o)
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was so cute :D
i loved it :)
i loved it :)
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh, yeah, I havn't read a story that amazing for a while.
All the little plot twists and stuff keep you on edge and it has this strange but good flow thing.
And can I just say I love you for mentioning Bright Eyes? Haha, they aren't popular really, but everyone seems to know them somehow. Or maybe I just live in the middle of nowhere. Either way, I liked the story a lot!
All the little plot twists and stuff keep you on edge and it has this strange but good flow thing.
And can I just say I love you for mentioning Bright Eyes? Haha, they aren't popular really, but everyone seems to know them somehow. Or maybe I just live in the middle of nowhere. Either way, I liked the story a lot!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read from the first chapter to the last...the story pulled me in. Wonderful story....I look forward to reading more from you.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I FING LOVE THIS THING.... ITS SOOOOO CUTE....
......FAN SCREAM... okay anyway >_> <_< >_> yeah im hyper lol but its kinna early
only 1 am anyway ummmmm.... write a sequal or something.... or a oneshot ....that would be
really awesome... I mean you cant just leave it like that ... ohhh you should do a oneshot were they
go for an interview when there old....squuuuueeeeeeeeeee ....do it do it do it ....>_< .... you dont have to
but i would love your bones dry ... lol jk k see ya
......FAN SCREAM... okay anyway >_> <_< >_> yeah im hyper lol but its kinna early
only 1 am anyway ummmmm.... write a sequal or something.... or a oneshot ....that would be
really awesome... I mean you cant just leave it like that ... ohhh you should do a oneshot were they
go for an interview when there old....squuuuueeeeeeeeeee ....do it do it do it ....>_< .... you dont have to
but i would love your bones dry ... lol jk k see ya
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I just read your story and I LOVED it! No seriously, it rocked! It was believable and it wasn't too dramatic and I think you did a great job describing Benji's emotions. Please don't stop writing stories, you can only get better!
ja ne
ja ne
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, be cheesy more often. As much as you want to, whenever you want to, and as long as you want to. I totally love this story!!