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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really becoming a fan. I like your style of writing. " I wouldn't want him to be looking that way at me. Because that's not how Dagen really smiles." I love that line because it just shows a deeper level of knowing someone. Great Job! I can't wait for you to update, but take your time. Great lines like this can't be rushed
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This ch had the right amount of sap in my opinion. You are doing a good job so far. I especially liked the touching endearment in the last sentence.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 9 chapters straight, and although I knew I only had an incomplete story when I started I was so disappointed to see it end. I'm really enjoying this story. You have great character development because I can feel how torn Ben is. Dagen is a real piece of work, I could see how Ben would be drawn to him, and really I just can't wait to see where you go with this next. Please update soon, because now you have me hooked. I would have never thought this was your first piece.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I nearly peed my pants when I saw you updated already. Dagen in sleep mode is just too cute and dreamy.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't wander into the original archive of aff, but I'm glad I did now. This story is very original and I hope things get hotter between Dagen and Ben! D:!!!!
Their band name is really amusing to me for some reason.
Their band name is really amusing to me for some reason.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You were right this was kind of a slow ch but I wanted to review to let you know you have one more reader out tere who thinks this is a great story and can't wait to read more. I think he is simply adorable. The "I love you" that slipped out was too cute.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't boring at all! And as you say, probably necessary for the plot. And we must have one of those :)
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I always get excited when you update this story. I just love it. You aren't moving anything too fast (which I hate) or too slow (which I hate more). I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love your characters!
Love the story! Thanks!
Love the story! Thanks!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wee!! i love it!