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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story which took a while to catch my interest just from reading the summary. It's actually a pretty good story and I like your characters. Please keep up the great work and don't lose interest in your story like so many other writers.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great as always
aww your smut is sooo cute
aww your smut is sooo cute
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good attempt at first smut, and I would say you were a success. My favorite line this chapter would have to be:"Dag, I..." "Want to bear my children. I know." "Fuck you." I say, without even a hope for conviction. I would never have know this was your first story. You are really great.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 - Oh God. That was sexy. A tad bit short but, hey, I'll take what I can get.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapy well written:) i could feel his embarressment. i woulda died
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god chapter 13 was great. Sometimes I wonder if Dagen is self-conscious at ALL.
Keep going, it's great!
Keep going, it's great!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 - Love this first chapter. Your writing style is awesome.
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 - Oh my. Dagen is an infection. The way you portray him, you really do fall in love with him. Ben too. Actually, all of them. They're just so original, yet not really, that you just fucking love them.
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - Love this chapter. The beginning and up until the middle or so reminded me a bit of Hard Core Logo. Which is a fucking awesome movie and book if you haven't seen it. The movie's better, though.