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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person Anon
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 16-awwww! I knew he would find it! and i understand his reaction, i wouldnt know what to say! smut?...did I hear smut!?!? keep up the good work! gosh. this is like my daily soap or something! I have to read it everyday! ^__^
person Jenna T.
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 - Oh my God! I LOVE The New Pornographers. Never seen them in concert, though. Damn. I laughed when he freaked out when Lils said taking it up the ass. Lmfao.
person Jenna T.
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 - Lmfao. He found the lube! Somehow I knew he would. Omg. But why the fuck did Benji ask that during the kiss? Seriously. Christ, I don't understand him sometimes. Oh well. I guess that's why I love him so much.
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's not bland..it's suspense building :). can't wait for the next chapter!
person Shanna
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read Chapter 15, and loved it because it shows how we often get into things without thinking them through all the way, then seemed shocked when something so simple rocks our world. I really just love your writing, it has a good flow that just makes me want to read more and more. Benjamin is funny and has this sweet innocence to him that just makes you love him. You are doing a wonderful job, and I can't wait for the next update.
person Rosei
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your writing style.
The characters dialog is great!
Thanks!
(Oh, and really HOT too!)
person eroburn
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it.:)

ya that would be a mood killer.
that's why u don't date groupies ew
person fallen
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are seriously spoiling us with updates!!!!!! I love the story!! and I really hope everything goes well between Dag and Ben...I firmly beleive dagen is being truthful!! *raises fist all anime like* okay, yeah im strange, but I love the story!
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was great!!...maybe ben should initiate some lovin' ;)
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!