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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person Jenna T.
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 - Oh my God! That was fucking sexy! I laughed really hard when he thought he was going to take a break. Lmfao. I was like 'that's totally something Dag would do'. But now with Ben...yet...
person Jenna T.
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 - You know you're stressing the whole test thing a lot in the story. Which usually means that something's going on! Oh God. I hope not. Really. I'll scream. Maybe it's just Ben's paranoia but yeah. I really hope that Dag's clean.

OMG I LOVE THIS LINE...

"I like you naked." He creeps closer, obviously unperturbed by his own nudity.

"That's swell, Dag, it really is. But I don't like me naked, and given the subject at hand, my opinion counts a lot more than yours does."

Err. Lines. Also, there's this one that I forgot to mention in my last review thing...

"God, Dagen..."

"I should suck cock for a living, yeah, yeah, get that all the time."

Definently one of my favorites. I love your story so much. Oh, and Happy New Year. Did I say Merry Christmas? I think I did. Oh fucking well.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!! i love ben! watch out dag!
person eroburn
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great updates. waiting for more.
lol i about died when i read the who is more submissive line
person sennin
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I continue to love this story and LOVE the fact that you update so quickly. It makes me smile when I check for updates obsessively and actually find a new chapter. Please keep up the great work.
person Shanna
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it might be cool to have psychiatrist as parents. They were totally cool about it, even though it was just thrown on them. Maybe the could see it like Lillian. Good Job! Thank God for Semester Breaks, I love them and I love your quick updates. I'm officially spoiled.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love when he calls him babe..i don't know why...but i do :)
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' great...love love loved it!
person Rosie
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 is a beautiful chapter and so H-O-T!
I love the love story!
Thanks!
person Shanna
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your'e a tease, and I love it. Keep up the good work.