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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person sennin
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh. Painful angst ridden chapter and with a cliffhanger promise of future smut...in a chapter or two. Soooo...that means later today, right. Right? Well, anyway, I am obviously hooked. Please keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a kick ass author..thanks for all the updates!!!!
person zakura
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story :)
and you really got me there. i was just like 'oh no i don't want this to be that kind of story...'
so thanks for writing this
person Jenna T.
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19 - Aww. I love the last line. In my opinion, though, Dag's cute all the time. More so Ben than Dag but yeah. Dag's more sexy. But I LOVE your fast updates to death! Every time I'm bored and I'm about kill myself I see you updated and then I prolong the suicide. < 3
person Jenna T.
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 - Oh my God! You Devil you! I sooo thought something was wrong. But when the Doctor said frequent sex with males I knew something was wrong. I mean...something was wrong as in mistake. Yeah. Oh my God! I can't believe Ben said that. Unexpected! Goddd. I'm not making sense. Your story does that to me.
person Jenna T.
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21 - Oh my Godddd. Your story is so awesome. I love the whole blood clot thing and yeah. Dag's a sweetie. But why is I mean... why WAS Benji so paranoid about Dag? Cause, so far, he's never done anything to make Benji not trust him. Aside from fucking a lot of chicks.
person eroburn
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... that was soooo mean.
dies.
person Shanna
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMG I was crying. I knew it was probably going to be HIV, but I was hoping Syphilis or something curable. But this is even better. That was awesome writing. The weight of the situation from the time he told Benji about the call toDegan being told he was clean was so heavy I could feel it. T think I'm going to read the chapter again right now.
person Shanna
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea, a confession of love. Ok Now I have a confession, I'm in love with this story.
person eroburn
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if he has something i am going to cry.
and then not read anymore:(