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for A Stage and a Bus

by orbitingjupiter

person Rosei
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for being so prolific!
Your the best!
Love these guys!
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was freakin' great..loved it!
person eroburn
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seemed sexy to me:) lol drools
person Rosei
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the New Years Eve update!
These guys really love each other and it feels so
good to read your story!
Happy New Year and best wishes to you and yours!
R
person dark angel
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING AMAZING!!! i loved it just discovered this story yesterday and i loved it amidiatly can't wait for more ace story seriously i can't wait. Your a brilliant writter the sex scene was brilliant!!
person sennin
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. That was awesome and the fact that you really updated that quickly makes it all the better. Really? First smut? You did great. Keep writing. You have lots of potential. I look forward to reading whatever you write in the future as well.
person PA
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha! oh, that was hilarious! You know, at the last line, i was scrolling down, painfully slow [as if i was part of the frickin audience], because i wasn't sure if i wanted to know what the answer would be. Brillant, though =).
person PA
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoops. by the way, i was referring to chapter 13 :). I just came across this gem, and i'm really glad. Chapter 10 has got to be the best chapter. ever. it just made everything in me constrict with that butterflies-in-tummy feeling. I'm glad you kept everything above the corny cute level; one can only handle so much =).
person Jenna T.
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21 - Fuck. THAT was your first lemon? Christ. You're so goddamn talented. That was fucking HOT. Really, really hot. And I love that you sort of incorporated Benji's personality and Dag's into it. If that makes sense? Ha. Anyways, Happy New Years once again.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww i love happy endings!! maybe not two chapters..don't make us wait!!