rate_review Reviews

Wow. That was intense...I wasn't expecting that. Thanks for the update.

aww that was cute...dag is winning my heart!

This story was funny, interesting, shocking, exciting, heart wrenching, detailed, etc etc etc. I love that Doug is mute and Lucifer is...diff? hehe. great characters.
You really did a great job on this story. Keep up the good work.

Ja
meadow

You have a real knack for humor in your story. The sheer conversation alone is what keeps me reading, not to mention the fact that emo boys and making sweet,sweet love in the background. I have to say this with all sincereity, you have created one of my favorite stories of all time. Thank you.

Chapter 23 - I was just about to go to sleep and what do I see! Only my favorite story! It's short but cute. Damn cute. The line...

"I'm well-endowed Benji, but a submarine?" Dag answers. "Let's be realistic, the torpedo would have been enough."

...was a definite plus. Another one for the scrapbook, my dear, another for the scrapbook.

I just really love your writing. I even enjoy the little chappies, as they let us know your thinking about us. Thank You and Happy New Year. I hope school will be a breeze this semester. I will continue to look for updates everyday because you have me spoiled and its "worth a try." But please take you time, I hate to rush your perfection.

I really adore this story! I keep having to come search for it to see if a new chapter has been added. :D Great characterization, interesting histories for both characters. I have this feeling that you know what your characters would have been doing in the womb and it makes your story very stable and plausible. Keep on trukin', but do make sure to ace your studies as much as possible!!

-Rin

Hey! Excuse this short fangirl-moment, but ...

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

I love this story!! Apart from the fact this was exactly the kind of story that I had been looking for for weeks I love it for being a wonderful, well-written story.

At first the narration style felt kind of odd (at least to me), but after chapter three or something I was totally drawn in and realised it's just perfect. I like Ben. And Dagen. And every other character as well, for being wonderful, like-like characters (and not something one-dimensional). They have a feeling of "life" to them. Sorry, I can't describe it better. I just wanted to say they feel like real people.

I really like the plot. Ben's, well, mistrust of Dagen's motives, his tentative admission of what he wants, being so scared of getting hurt. And I so love the moments when Dagen's emotions shine through without Ben realising what's going on. The songs Dag's been singing. And how insecure he is inspite of all his confidence when it comes to something he really means and wants.

Oh, and nice lemons. ^-^ They felt a lot realer than so many others I've read so far.

Alltogether, a really wonderful story. (And it makes me so happy to know that they'll have a happy end). I'll be waiting for another installment.

Cira

GREAT!

fucking hot that chapter.lol
*searchs for his boyfriend*