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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH my gosh..i don't know why but i'm so upset :(... please please authoress, tell me this gets better...i knew you said you liked happy endings...
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My mouth is hanging open and my heart has dropped to my stomach. I'm heart broken for Benji. . . a double betrayal, and to think he would have to raise that child for it's lifetime. It was so emotional. I wanted to cry. That was awesome writing, even if I didn't want to read it. But, I remember the promise you made us in chapter 20 about happy endings.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was both a very good chapter and a very cruel chapter...but they all live happily ever after. Right? I mean the birthday present in the sock drawer should make everything better. Right?
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lillian brought some doubt to my head too :( (bites on lip)
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dag better shut Liliann down. Show her who Ben belongs too!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter because it really shows how even when we think everything is perfect the power of suggestion that things are not as they seem can really rock our world. I really hope Dagen doesn't hurt Ben, maybe he just acted an ass with those girls because he was repressing his feeling towards Ben for so long. Yeah that's it screw what Lillian said. Great chapter, very emotional, and made us think. Oh yeah and HOT! Keep up the good work, and update soon.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn...was that good..or bad?!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn it guys..just talk and answer all the questions... give us all some closure..whew!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chappy 25- nice work. I absolutely love the story. it doesnt need a plot. how about Luce? is he and the toher guy together? im oddly curious. there seems to be a connection somehwhere between luce and...oh no i forgot the other guys name. oopsie. keep it up!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much so far Dagen and Benji are soo adorable I loved how u started it and how they have progressed and Dagen's cockiness just cracks me up and Benji is realli cute too his shyness keep writing please love this story!!!!!