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for Into Oblivion

by Moniquill

person ojo!
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot!!!! I totally love it! chapters need to be longer though.
person DrkDreamer
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes - chapter 2 is much too short. But it sets up all sorts of wicked possibilities.

I want to beg you to return to Cygen - and finish that one up. I searched for you on the web and found you in several places. You write the most beautiful angst I've ever seen. But you do have a rotten history of finishing things. Yes, I understand how compelling a *new* idea can be. But your readers are left wanting.
person shavin
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I am very intreguied. Please write more.
person L.L. Crush
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RAWR! Why can't your chapters be longer?! ... Anywho, I really like what you've written so far, and looking forward to the next update, and all that fun stuff. Good work!
person DrkDreamer
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is wonderful as always. Just met James - and already care about him.

Can't wait til he gets tied up and punished....
person James
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More OMG More... that was one of the most pignant stories i have ever read and its just a tidbit. So vivid, telling, yet elusive. Its like I'm there, let alone my name is James, I'm picturing this done to me.

Wow, relly you deserve all praise.

~ James ;-)
person ojo
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! must have more!