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That's a nice one. Short and to the point, neat style. Keep on dishing out the wonderfulness! ^_~

niiiiiiiiiiiice...............

update, Mortal! *licks fangs*

no, really, this story is so promising!

Awesome. You're pulling in your readers deeper and deeper.

James is SO in for it.

I really like this story so far, and am anxious to read more :) please update soon.

awesomesauce **grins** it's kind of like the other thing.... except that the vampire isn't chained up/in a cage, it's the boy who's captive. And he has a lot less of a problem with it, which is kind of fun. I like the way he makes the best of things in return for something - anything - warm. And there was one line that seemed really familiar, but whatever. **grins** I love this. (Er, I'm going out on a limb and assuming that you're the Moniquill that was on Fiction Press, yes? **cheerful**) Anyway, I hope to see more of this. Or more of anything, really. I love your stuff. **grin**

Okay...really like what I've read so far....but also, little confused! (doesn't take a lot, trust me, lol)...Your character Val mentions that the boy smells of being a mage. So, is this James some sort of wizard?...
Looking forward to the next chapter, where hopefully some answers will be revealed!

Interesting :)

Very interesting beginning and very well written

What a great set up so far, a prostitute who doesn't care about himself anymore and a creature who does care, even if it's selfishly...

I'm waiting to find out more *hint*

I've read your two stories on AFF and I absolutely love them. Your concepts are original and unique. I'd like you to e-mail me so that I can send you some information about a project I'm working on. In a nutshell, I'm starting a website that will host a few (very talented) authors of original (yaoi) writings. Its got a lot more to it, but just e-mail me if you think you'd be interested. I'm going to put this in both of your stories review sections to make sure you get this. Keep up the great work!