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for Into Oblivion

by Moniquill

schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No,morechaptersplease. o___o

Oh. God. That was...oh so very awesome. Perfect. XDDD I can't even give you contstructive criticism, it's that wonderful.

I love Val to death already. <3
person Mayo
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GR! I love it. It's such a wonderful story.
I want it.
I want to eat it.
o-o

Yeah, so anyways, you have to continue. :]
person S.Tori
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wheee! Way fun. I love the idea of people who are addicted to vamps - and the vampiric obsession with loyalty. I also love how the vampire is all powerful and sensual and wonderful and almost perfect... but real enough that in the end of the chapter, he's talking about grocery shopping. That made me smile. Big thumbs up for this story ^_^
person jayree05
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A sexual Rembrant? That's like, the best line ever.
person oujo
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so love you!! please update soon!
person Sekre
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea with the vamp addict thing...very creative.
person DrkDreamer
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a mundane and perfect end to the chapter. "We need to go grocery shopping."

LOL-LOL-LOL
person archie187
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a good ch the sex scene was especially hot I could almost feel the urgency and energy coursing through his body.
person Semme
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Most people would freak out but not him! Ooooh no. I like this story.. it tis fun.
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!