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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg... ch.42 made me want to cry sooo badly! can't they just say they love eachother? but then again if it happens too fast there would be no story.... and what a story indeed.
thank u soo much for the update~!! i'll be waiting for the next one!! <3
thank u soo much for the update~!! i'll be waiting for the next one!! <3
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn.. after two weeks i was really hoping for at least a kiss..hehe.. but i suppose the way it turned out was more realistic.. and more of a torture, for both readers and characters. :( but im glad thats everything is ok between them, now on with the next chapter!!!
update soon~
update soon~
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I admit it. I'm a wimp and I cried. But how could I not?
I just knew Boyd would act like that (which I guess means I actually know him quite well by now and can understand his actions and motives, which kinda makes me happy), but actually seeing the whole scene written was tougher than I thought. Their relationship is so special because they're not your typical couple, you don't see them constantly touching and kissing and telling about all those feelings (and this chapter was actually the first time they really admitted just how strong emotions lie there), but they still seem to mean EVERYTHING to each other. Although one can't deny it can be almost scary. What would Sin do if something really bad happened to Boyd, considering he raised that gun...
I am happy you made Sin's thoughts about the whole Jessica ordeal clear. Won't say more about that but I hope it made some think. *hints*
But the chapter still left me worried about Boyd. It is weird that the Agency left him live, hmm. Maybe there will be some explanation later.
Ok, this review sucked but right now I feel messed up like those two boys did, which means you did your job well. And I'm glad to see you back!
I just knew Boyd would act like that (which I guess means I actually know him quite well by now and can understand his actions and motives, which kinda makes me happy), but actually seeing the whole scene written was tougher than I thought. Their relationship is so special because they're not your typical couple, you don't see them constantly touching and kissing and telling about all those feelings (and this chapter was actually the first time they really admitted just how strong emotions lie there), but they still seem to mean EVERYTHING to each other. Although one can't deny it can be almost scary. What would Sin do if something really bad happened to Boyd, considering he raised that gun...
I am happy you made Sin's thoughts about the whole Jessica ordeal clear. Won't say more about that but I hope it made some think. *hints*
But the chapter still left me worried about Boyd. It is weird that the Agency left him live, hmm. Maybe there will be some explanation later.
Ok, this review sucked but right now I feel messed up like those two boys did, which means you did your job well. And I'm glad to see you back!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You won't believe how much I have been looking forward to this update... (I checked your website like two times a day)
Anyway...God, it was painful to read how they were fighting. It made me feel miserable, too. I liked how Boyd thought that Sin wasn't real at first. It just showed so well how much he'd been suffering the last six months.
Actually, I liked that Sin really was going to shoot himself. Without much hesitation it seems since he fired a shot. Because mostly, in scenes like that, they're just bluffing, wanting the other person to tell them not to do it. Obviously, Sin didn't. It fits his character.
You pulled off the crying perfectly - he wasn't sobbing hysterically or anything, just crying. It's a lot like...crying is for Sin like admitting defeat. Defeat here being that he actually needs Boyd, I suppose, but that just how I understood it... By the way, I really liked the wording of this sentence: "He stopped again and realized with a vague sense of humiliation that he was about to display the ultimate form of human weakness."
Great chapter!
Anyway...God, it was painful to read how they were fighting. It made me feel miserable, too. I liked how Boyd thought that Sin wasn't real at first. It just showed so well how much he'd been suffering the last six months.
Actually, I liked that Sin really was going to shoot himself. Without much hesitation it seems since he fired a shot. Because mostly, in scenes like that, they're just bluffing, wanting the other person to tell them not to do it. Obviously, Sin didn't. It fits his character.
You pulled off the crying perfectly - he wasn't sobbing hysterically or anything, just crying. It's a lot like...crying is for Sin like admitting defeat. Defeat here being that he actually needs Boyd, I suppose, but that just how I understood it... By the way, I really liked the wording of this sentence: "He stopped again and realized with a vague sense of humiliation that he was about to display the ultimate form of human weakness."
Great chapter!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaghhhhhkkk!!! *scraps her nails again the sreen trying to see if there is anything else hidden under the margins or under the screen*
aaaaaaahhhhhh!!! T_T The long awaited reunion was even better than expected. XDDDD But it's going to be an agony to wait to see what will happen next...
This story just gets better and better even when you think you can't get any more atached to it. Great job really really wonderfull job.
*bows* thanks alot for sharing the story.
aaaaaaahhhhhh!!! T_T The long awaited reunion was even better than expected. XDDDD But it's going to be an agony to wait to see what will happen next...
This story just gets better and better even when you think you can't get any more atached to it. Great job really really wonderfull job.
*bows* thanks alot for sharing the story.
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is awsome!!!!
i just spent a whole day reading it and still didn't read everything.
I was wondering... how long is it going to be: just to know :)
it's nice to read stories that actualy have a good plot :)
i just spent a whole day reading it and still didn't read everything.
I was wondering... how long is it going to be: just to know :)
it's nice to read stories that actualy have a good plot :)
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderfull.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow three new chapters....maybe I should go more often on holidays....
but I hate this cliffhangers......waiting for more!
(What are the plans for book Two???)
but I hate this cliffhangers......waiting for more!
(What are the plans for book Two???)
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I was just thinking, and since I kept reading this amazing story for quite some time now, I thought it'd be nice if I let you know that you definitely are some of the most brilliant writers out there, ever. And I've read A LOT of books during my short lifetime. The depth and psychology of this tale really, really got to me. Usually, you can tell a work of quality from the feel of the first few sentences, and I liked this immediately. You're both great artists and I just can't wait to see more! I'm scared by the thought that it'll all probably end soon...