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howd you 2 come up with this story. what inspired it. watch alot of mission impossible?? how bout point of no return? did ya get a bad case of james bond munchies?

Nice chapter, but I feel so sorry for poor Ryan T__T But at least everything is sort of back to normal.

I wonder what is Thierry's story and whether Sin and Boyd will have to go back to Mexico to find him. If they do, I hope they take Ryan with them - a change of climate might do him some good (or there could be hot threesome action... .... .... .... *snaps out of perverted mode*)

Looks like Carhart knows or suspects something about Chingon, I wonder if he will appear in the story again. And what exactly had been happening in the Agency if Boyd feels that everyone is worried or something.. Too bad Sin is now addicted to cigarettes - I can't stand smokers =))

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. This one was long and it's good, but I just can't get enough of the story! And it is great to hear that there will be book 2 and side stories!

Hello!

Ok, the only part I didn't like too much was the very start (before the agent came to get Boyd). It seemed a bit lengthy, maybe that over-wordiness again, and some of those chapters were huge. But that is all.

I'm glad we got some explanation as to why Boyd was not terminated. I won't say much about the plot because you know what you are doing, it's very well thought out. So they're going to Mexico again? And I honestly can't wait to get more information about Lo más chingón and who the hell he is. And I think Sin has never actually seen him, so I wonder if that is important for the plot somehow....hmm hmm.

Liked the way you made it feel how the agency is the same (Sin's collar back, people's fear of him) but how Sin and Boyd have changed. And that casual way Sin asked for the cigarette, the way he's interacting freely with some others now too, not just Boyd.. very fascinating. And I bet some moralists won't like he's still smoking as to which I say WTF? Smoking can be sexy, especially when it's sexy people smoking. Yes.

Loved the "something has changed" comment from Sin and the lead to the bathroom. And I bet you guys think the shower scene would be too cliche or something, but for a moment or two I really hoped that's where the sex was going. Or at least after sex, those filthy guys. Heh. Although now that I know you don't really like writing the sex scenes (I'm not sure if it was Sonny or Ais that mentioned this, or maybe both) it makes me giggle a bit when I think about you sitting down, banging your head on desk..."....cock....lube....ass....in out in out....ooh aahh.....boring...." haha. But if you really don't like writing them it doesn't show as they're simple but very sexy. And kissing, oh how I love them kissing. I love it more than the sex.

By the way I really find the political aspect of this story fascinating. I'm not sure how much you think about the actual rality these days while writing the story, but the comment about how all critisism against the US government is seen as terrorism reminded me of what's going on at the moment. I could say more on that but that would be beyond the reality of your story so it won't matter. I guess sometimes I just mix some aspects from what's going on in real world and what's going on in your story and want to comment, but anyway. Moving on.

Ryan is still cute. I wonder how he manages to reserve that innocent aura in the environment he's living in. He's like a kid, so open and adorable. I hope you won't kill him off. *sob*

And did I just read Boyd making fun of himself? His seriousness and blond hair? That's some weird stuff. Looks like the boy is loosening up.

Thank you for the update, man that was one lengthy chapter, wow. You rock. Hardcore (as I think Ais would say).

Yay a new chapter ^^. I love that you have such a detailed story behind everything that happens!
Oh, and, Deathscythe! Everyone's favorite shinigami in a nice toy-size, it creates even more reality in the story when you mix in stuff like that. (And, well, I just love Deathscythe... >_<)

I was so excited when I saw that you updated, it's not even normal any more xD And you won't believe how happy I am to know that you two won't just stop writing. Anyway, on to the chapter..

I loved Boyd's angsting in the beginning, like how he wasn't sure if Sin had ever been there or not...but, I wondered...shouldn't he see the bullet-hole? Well, but maybe I got something wrong there.

By the way, the image of Sin, standing in front of Boyd's door, knocking politely and waiting for him to open the door made me laugh.

Boyd's memory of wanting to visit the agency was...well, disturbing, somehow, but very well done on your part. One really gets the sense of confusion when reading that part.

I so didn't have it coming that they would summon Boyd again or the mission in general, for that matter. I expected a lot of things, but not that. Which is a good thing, I guess :)
But the briefing...it seemed as unreal to me as to Boyd somehow.

And hey, Thierry is back! Sort of. I always liked him, even if I'm not sure why. And I feel kind of sorry for him. Poor, French bastard.

I liked how the interaction between Boyd and Sin was very slightly awkward at first, because neither knew where they stood - until, well, Sin made clear what he wanted ;)

The relaxing atmosphere when Boyd talked to Ryan was...a blessing, really. Honestly, after reading a new chapter I feel so tired because you make the reader go through every emotion the characters feel.

On a side note, I really like how now Boyd seems to be the one who's mentally less stable - while he was the more reasonable one at the beginning of your story. It's a great touch and it shows what the Agency can do to people. Well, obviously, this wasn't the Agency's fault entirely, but still.

OMG! I was so excited to see you guys updated I think I almost had an MI (myocardial infarct)lol JK

Anyway so here's what's been going on in my head. First off, I'm so glad Boyd is okay, or as okay as he can be, I can still see some serious mind-fuck going on with him, but I hopeh he gets better. Also, it does seem kind of strange that the Angency didn't kill Boyd regardless of his mother's influence, but it may be that, the Agency, just realized that Boyd is the only tentative thread Sin has to sanity so they might not have wanted to risk having Sin come back and go all psycho becasue they killed his partner.

And I know this is going to sound crazy and it's porbably completely off but it almost sounds as if Sin was somehow enhanced, kind of like the bionic man type of thing. Yeah I know sounds nuts, but in my defense I'm sleep deprived and I should have probably posted this when I can, more coherently, compose sentences.

Well all in all this is a great story, you guys are awesome and anything that you write I'll more than likely read. So keep up the great work. Looking forward for the next update.

Whether your political beliefs and Hsin's coincide or not, I think it's rather clever of you two to weave America's pretentious perception of its position on the world's hierarchy into the storyline. I haven't finished reading this chapter yet, but I had to review because I found Hsin's tirade on the agency all too amusing.

So far, so good.


p.s. Trovosky intrigues me so I voted for him, but I see he's rather lacking in votes. However, I feel you should write a story about him nonetheless. *wink*

Another great chapter, it was worth the wait! I absolutely didn't expect that kind of chapter, I thought Boyd would be dead, but it is nice that everything turned out more or less ok =)

Thanks for writing such a good story!

Ooh! an update an update! You made my day ^^. Very angsty chapter, well, I guess that was to be expected.. I'm looking forward for the next chapter!

Wonderful chapter. You guys are writing such a great story (at this point its a book). Bravo, bravo! You should be so proud of such creative talent!