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person Minako
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you notice this?
Published [2006-12-03] -:- Updated [2007-12-02 00:00:00]
1 year exactly.
person Meh
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg last chapter! if you didn't say there would be another story i would have cried, not only from my ideas of who this mystery man from their time in Mexico is in addition to who invaded ^_~ And i'm gonna burst if i never find out if i'm correct or wrong. Plus i want more Sin/Boyd goodness, of which there was far to little in the story >:( *wags a scolding finger*
so please, update soon, even if it's little side stories about Sin a Boyd, or i may spontaneously combust and you'll loose a reader! *gasp* :o
:D
So in keeping with the fact that this is technically a review, WUV THE STORY! My only complaint, as stated above, is the lack of Sin/Boyd goodness in the last story. >:} rarrr
I quite enjoy the depth of plot and the fact that it isn't port without plot (or plot what plot). From the point of view of someone who's not in the least a literary critic (though have read a good number of stories over the years on this sight), I thought it was extremely well written (you can take this assessment for what it's worth).
*hugs*
I await with great anticipation for what you have to write in the future, and of the happenings of two of my favorite original characters on the sight. on the sight period :D (up there with Harry and Draco :P)
huzzah!
person ambs
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLLY MOLLY. SINS FATHER IS BACK!!!!

...ok now im not so certain, that first part was my gut reaction.
i guess ill just have to wait for b2.

i cant believe this is the end of book one.
connors dead. wow.
ohh man, ryan is so much apart of the story, if he dies itd be devastating.
ok, so, are we gonna find out more bout sins like super humaness in b2?
ah man, the end. but ive been waiting for this. like a harry potter series.

i love this friggin story!
and i cant wait for the next one
will it be a long time before you start postin it?>
oooh, i cant believe it. just so frigin amazin.
person rio
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story though it kinda reminded me of La femme nikita.I'm impressed by the level of skill in your writing-do you have any other stories out there?
person ta.
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There's been so much action lately my head is spinning. I still love all this and wish you never stopped. Right now I just wanna see the last chapter and see how it all ends (until the next book). I have only one thing in my mind i wanna know right now. And that is what really happened to Emilio. You must tell that to us one day.
person Aleks
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great as always!!!!!! Love this story !!!

Well for one moment I thought Kassian could be the traitor, but he would have been recognized....or some completely new group???

really good work, worth the long waiting!!!

As everybody else :) I´m waiting for more!
person cricri
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot, take a while to read but it was worth it. The plot and character’s development is amazing. Sin and Boyd come a long way. Sin from being a psychopath and heartless, come to a point when he actually feel something. As for Boyd, an introvert and antisocial as he was, finally got to admit that he loves Sin, I think he didn’t even say it to Lou. I always wondering what will become of them in the end. Will they escaped the Agency and live happily ever after just the two of them after the mission complete or they’re going to be separated eventually, then keep all that ever happened to themselves as they continue on with their job (which is I’ll find it a very suck ending, but I’m sure you wouldn’t do that to your loyal and faithful readers, right?)
person Aiko Namika
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I discovered this fic three days ago. I haven't stopped reading it since, and hace been completely and utterly caught up in every moment of it. There have been several times where my heart just ached for Sin and Boyd, and for the others as well. I've been caught up in the pain, the joy, the fear, and the anger, everything. The two of you have created an absolutely enthralling world, with fascinating characters who, even though they don't quite have the same mind-set as most "normal" people, are still quite empathetic.

I'm absolutely blown away by the depth and complexity of this story. I honestly cannot find the proper words for it. If I were critiquing this for a class, I don't think that I would even be able to BS any sort of critique. Well, I think there may have been a misspelling once, somewhere back there, but the rest of the story just flung it out of my mind.

Thank you, so much, for sharing this creation of yours, this world, and these characters. They are brilliant, and I will be checking back almost obsessively to see how this ends.
person magge
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not able to make a intelligent review, looooove this.
Want more of this.
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story sooo much!! I am terribly sad to see it coming to an end, but I still can't wait to see what happens. I'm conflicted, obviously. :)