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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay they met :) I'm excited for their first mission.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can hardly believe you have only a few more than 300 hits.
This story is just amazing - well plotted and written wonderfully.
I'll give myself a sideways compliment, too. Maybe it takes an intelliugent reader to fully appreciate your efforts. A complicated plot and not much smut...
At any rate, I feel like you're doing a fantastic job - and I beg you to see the story through.
This story is just amazing - well plotted and written wonderfully.
I'll give myself a sideways compliment, too. Maybe it takes an intelliugent reader to fully appreciate your efforts. A complicated plot and not much smut...
At any rate, I feel like you're doing a fantastic job - and I beg you to see the story through.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Phenominal, simply phenominal. The plotline is engaging and your writing style is gorgeously vivid in its detail. I can't wait to see the interaction between Boyd and Sin- Please update soon.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm so psyched you have 250 pages of this because it is pure gold. the jarring descriptions, the in depth psychological analyses, the plot... it's all spectacular. i feel like i'm reading what would be a national bestseller. you have some serious talent.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter - I feel as if I understand Boyd's character much better. I like how you made him average in skills. I would've been skeptical if he turned out to be some deadly ninja in a deceptive disguise when it seems like he spent the last half of his life (well, after Louis' death) in his room. Can't wait until Sin and Boyde meet ^^
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderfully well-written story! The characters and circumstances are riveting.
I'm really looking forward to Sin and Boyd meeting - and the aftermath.
I'm really looking forward to Sin and Boyd meeting - and the aftermath.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Please write more!!!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, intriguing story so far ^^ Can't wait until Boyd and Sin interact - should be most interesting.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story idea and characters. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far; fascinating plot line and interesting characters. Sin is awesome, despite the people he killed, I still feel bad for him having been put in 'the box' and being molested by crappy guards. >XD Anywho, I'm really looking forward to the character interaction between Sin and Boyd; it should be hot. Hehe. Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting updates. Until next time...